Unlaced

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by VanillaEssence

How the day progresses...

unlaced
 
 
 
 
 
the great divide that is the space
 
between our hearts will come unlaced
 
and puddle softly at our feet
 
 
 
by morning's mist I'll taste your bloom
 
and through the heat of afternoon
 
we'll tie each other in the sheets
 
 
 
when evening spills your musky scent
 
into my mouth, I shall relent
 
and scream "I love you" in repeat


Submitted: June 26, 2020

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zebo85

Short and very very sweet! Outstanding as always and what a tasty bloom it must be.

Fri, June 26th, 2020 4:39pm

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Thank you, Zebo!

Fri, June 26th, 2020 9:45pm

Extinct

Its beautiful...

Fri, June 26th, 2020 9:00pm

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Thank you!

Fri, June 26th, 2020 9:48pm

Dick Wood

Very intense, the energy that was put into your poem in only nine lines.

Fri, June 26th, 2020 9:36pm

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Thank you, Dick. I'm glad you think so!

Fri, June 26th, 2020 9:49pm

Storywriterx

I want to tie you up and use the rope to pull us together whenever the mood strikes me so I can kiss your Megalips
XoxoX Ron

Sat, June 27th, 2020 3:04am

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Please do, Ron!

Fri, June 26th, 2020 9:47pm

benawriter

Thank you for allowing us another taste of your glorious sweetness......

Sat, June 27th, 2020 12:58pm

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Thank you, Ben, for licking my spoon...

Sat, June 27th, 2020 1:33pm

Writing_wall44

Love every word. Reminds me of a lazy Saturday morning.

Sat, June 27th, 2020 4:55pm

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I'm so glad...hey, it's Saturday! You tied in the sheets yet?

Sat, June 27th, 2020 1:35pm

Writing_wall44

I don't kiss and tell but....

Sat, June 27th, 2020 9:54pm

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tell me...tell me...

Sat, June 27th, 2020 4:09pm

DLCannon

Wow! if she'll be able to scream with a cumload in her mouth, that must be a Hell of a vocal cord!

Sun, July 5th, 2020 8:18pm

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Good point! She must be a ventriloquist.
Thanks for reading, DL!

Sun, July 5th, 2020 9:23pm

VanillaEssence

I love the way you finish each group of words with the perfect rhyming word for the last word of the group of words before it.You are not just a fabulous poet...you understand what makes it "tick".In the same way a really good artist with a paintbrush understands light and shade.

Mon, July 20th, 2020 6:30am

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Wow, Vanilla - Thank you! You make me blush.
I'd love to be able to paint. Sadly, that's not something I do very well.
I love you comment! Thanks for reading

Mon, July 20th, 2020 12:26pm

Dark Eyed Stranger

Afternoon sex is best when there is all the time in the world to explore and encore. Thanks for this glimpse of heaven. Another divide I ponder is the gap between your thighs that forms the gateway to thirsts as yet unquenched.

Fri, November 13th, 2020 2:17am

Author
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There's a sea of love waiting for you...

Mon, November 16th, 2020 5:44pm

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