Still My Valentine
My Valentine is miles from here
and February's atmosphere
has cloaked the stars. A snowy shroud
engulfs my heart inside a cloud.
But through the tundra's ice and snow
I feel his warming afterglow,
a breath across the vast divide
expelled just as he comes inside
my wanton valley, wet and warm -
his shelter from the raging storm.
With Cupid's arrow plunging deep,
he wakes me from my winter's sleep.
Our bounding pulses beat as one.
He melts me like a summer sun.
My flower drenched; my petals splayed,
we float atop the love we've made.
Eternal Spring has frozen time
forever with my Valentine.
Submitted: February 18, 2021
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Captivating.
Seems somehow a true account.
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If only it were, Richard...
Thu, February 18th, 2021 7:11pm
I want you to be my Valentine
and be only mine
To make your heart beat
and to feel your heat.
As I go inside
your legs spread wide.
With your little breasts
pressed against my chest.
So far apart
you've captured my heart.
I'll be your 007
and make you feel like you've gone to heaven.
XoxoX Ron/SWx
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Awe, that is so sweet, Ron! Have I really captured your heart, 007? The spy who loves me...
Thu, February 18th, 2021 7:16pm
OMG... you are STILL...?!?!?!
AND... I am your RSVP...?!?!?
I'M... on my KNEES...!!!!
YOURS... forever and ALWAYS...!!!
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You're all of those, Sam...
just where I want you
So nice of you to lift my pole;
Since in the North it shirks it’s role—
A sunny valley it must find...
To rut, to plow, to Pleasant grind!
A Santa’s fervor it can plant:
Don’t doubt it girl, ‘twill make you pant~
Then spray it’s snow, yet warm your tush—>
If invited, entered, in your bush!
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What makes you think I have a bush, Spy?
I love your poem, by the way!
You like a pink valley?
Hey, I’m the Spy who loves you around here!!! 007 was my phone number first, to any other, well it will be worst!
Fri, February 19th, 2021 10:35am
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Oh, excuse me, Spy! I keep thinking of you as a merman waiting for me on a deserted island rather than a double agent. You have a phone out there? I want to play with your coconuts.
Fri, February 19th, 2021 12:45pm
This is beautifully detailed and well written. I love how poetic it sounds, and how you have constructed it. It's lovely. I hope you write more.
Fri, February 19th, 2021 7:22pm
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Thank you so much, Isabella! I was inspired by someone...
Fri, February 19th, 2021 12:47pm
How cute! Glad you have a valentine.....
Sun, February 21st, 2021 10:47pm
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Thank you, DL!
Sun, February 21st, 2021 3:50pm
This is just a sweet nod to the love we all want. It's very warming.
Thu, February 25th, 2021 4:13pm
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Thanks, W!
I saw you had a new chapter up! Coming to read that soon...
if only Valentine really WAS for forever......
Sat, January 22nd, 2022 10:04pm
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Hey, did you know that Meatloaf died yesterday? "Paradise by the dashboard light"
It sort of brings to mind that you may not want anything to really be forever..
Lovely and surprising; I liked it. And I'm also on my knees, waiting, my Princess...
Mon, July 25th, 2022 3:28pm
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Awe, that's so sweet.
This was a response to another poem.
I'm glad you liked it.
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Elenore B Rigby
This is sweet. I like it, a lot.
Thu, February 18th, 2021 1:52amAuthor
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Thank you, Elenore!
Wed, February 17th, 2021 6:06pm