Space Bound

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by The Psychic Cherry

Love's Final Fronteir

Space Bound
 

I am gifted
to your darkness

pale in the star shadow sky
with comet speed
I fizzle
 
lightless stone
you and your universe
carry me
weightless
soundless
motionless
draped in your planetary arms
your Saturn rings
angelic cosmic halo
Heaven's ambassador
 
This War
these blistering meteors
these molten tears...
shall I ever feel anything
but heat -

how long will you hold me
your willing prisoner
slave to your needs
servant of desires
 
I hand myself over
shackled wrists
naked want
glistening anticipation
throbbing, pulsing
a beating heart
a tiny bead
the softest opening
 
my scent is confession
my blush is surrender
your hands and your lips
my welcome bondage


Submitted: January 30, 2020

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The Psychic Cherry

Such an amazing and beautiful poem! It's just one of its kind. I really loved each and every word you used there. Truly magnificent.
:)

Thu, January 30th, 2020 8:50am

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Girl, you are too sweet - and thank you from the bottom of my heart! You make my day!

Mon, February 3rd, 2020 8:34pm

benawriter

This is what I was talking about in my last PM to you. Absolutely amazing.

Thu, January 30th, 2020 2:05pm

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Awe, Ben. You make me blush so much, I walk around pink...

Mon, February 3rd, 2020 8:21pm

Lizziewolf

This is amazingly beautiful!

Thu, January 30th, 2020 5:05pm

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Thank you, Lizzie. I'm so glad you like!

Mon, February 3rd, 2020 8:20pm

Extinct

I love it! Angel

Fri, January 31st, 2020 8:10pm

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Thank you, sweetness!

Mon, February 3rd, 2020 8:18pm

Sarah C

So beautiful!

Sun, February 2nd, 2020 6:26pm

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Thank you, Sarah!

Mon, February 3rd, 2020 8:13pm

Megan Mackenzie

You've combined two of my favorite things!
Sex and UFOS!

HOLY metaphors! You are truly gifted Meg.
I was going to highlight specific parts that really struck me, but that would be almost the entire thing.

Especially this part:
"my scent is confession, my blush is surrender"
Breathtaking.

Mon, February 17th, 2020 2:08am

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I'm so glad you like this, girl...and I had no idea you were into aliens. Well, I should have known that. We just haven't discussed it.

Your reviews make me smile! Thank you!

Wed, February 19th, 2020 9:53pm

DLCannon

Sounds like this chick wants to be taken for a ride! Hu hu!

Tue, March 10th, 2020 8:35pm

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Always, DL!

Tue, March 10th, 2020 9:15pm

kalelthemith

Your writing is so eloquently delicious, I find it difficult to use expletives. As usual, you have lit my sense of writing, and may put finger to keyboard, or anywhere else I choose, to finish a bondage story or 2 myself. lurv the poems DK.

Sat, May 23rd, 2020 11:38am

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Kalel, thank you for that amazing comment and I have the perfect place for your fingers...

Sun, May 24th, 2020 7:23pm

Spyguy

The space where your lover should take you, though dark it ever may be, should fill with your screams that I make you, with ecstasy, cry out for me!!!

Satisfying!!!

Wed, June 3rd, 2020 1:47am

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Oh, that's very good, Spy! I like that!
How did you know I was a screamer?

Tue, June 2nd, 2020 7:07pm

Spyguy

If ever the moment encountered, the joy in your heart you should share... The pleasure one gives is enhightened just knowing how blessed your fare!!!

Wed, June 3rd, 2020 2:15am

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You have my heart and my joy, Spy...

Tue, June 2nd, 2020 7:49pm

Spyguy

Scream out your pleasure as I fill your whole;
Mental ambitions as you play your role…
Pleasing our intricate mental releases:
Wandering cosmos as pleasure increases~
I’ll be your astronaut taking you higher…
Than any Earth man, I’ve fulfilled your desire!

Thu, August 12th, 2021 7:20am

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Thank you, my poetic astronaut! I thought you were my merman!
Thanks for reading, Spy...

Thu, August 12th, 2021 8:59pm

Gavin A. Momstretcher

Holy Fuck! This is masterful! I’m blown away!

Thu, September 9th, 2021 1:09pm

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Wow....you make me blush, Gavin.
Thank you so much for that!

Thu, September 9th, 2021 7:09pm

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