Seduction's Sonnet

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by The Psychic Cherry

This is an English Sonnet (Shakespearian)
Iambic Pentameter (meter)
Three quatrains and a couplet

Seduction's Sonnet
 
 
My pet, please let the linger of my mouth
caress your neck where pulse beats out my name
This lover's liquid residue flows south
a tongue of sweet saliva to your flame
 
A sparkled ribbon glistens like a tear
down chest and belly's saturated sheen
It leads to where your tangled curls appear
as waves of ocean emptied from a stream
 
Let mighty tides ingest our fiery urge
Let molten lava spatter on my shore
Your mountain spews a fountain from the surge
of native drums we pound as if at war
 
Come paint my petals panting, creamy white
then kiss my soft retreat into the night...


Submitted: January 24, 2020

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The Psychic Cherry

Wow! That was so beautifully written! Each and every word is so magnificently used! I really truly loved it! Especially the part "as waves of ocean emptied from the sea" really awesome. :)

Sat, January 25th, 2020 4:11am

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Thank you, PC! I'm so glad you liked it. I love your review!

Sat, January 25th, 2020 8:53pm

Extinct

WOW!

Sat, January 25th, 2020 5:06pm

Author
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Thank you, sweetness!

Sat, January 25th, 2020 8:54pm

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