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"That was hot and fun and thrilling"
I'll see you again, Simon
at the end
of an alley, dark and serene.
Graffiti painted in green.
I'll shed off my coat in this sinister scene. I'll walk like a queen -
nude save for stockings; tits like a teen.
"This city is mean."
I'm rubbing my cunt.
You'll give me a spanking for pulling this stunt,
but for now I say, "Fuck me!" You're quick to comply.
My palms to the wall,
my face to the sky
with your fists in my hair
and your cock up my ass.
A group of drug dealers are slithering past.
They see us. They want me.
We're caught, no escape.
I'm naked, defenseless,
and primed to be raped.
"Just finish me, Simon. Just fill me with cum.
We're trapped in this alley. There's nowhere to run."
I feel a warm trickle; your sperm down my leg.
In a flash they're upon us -
"Now bitch, you can beg,
but I'll fuck you unconscious and then when I'm through,
I'll turn you around and fuck your mouth too."
"Please, Simon, don't fight them! Just do as they say.
No point in resisting. They'll win anyway."
In the darkness of concrete walls spackled with brick,
I suffer their pounding; I swallow each prick.
They cum in my pussy. They piss on my face.
They ream my tight butthole and give me a taste.
They slap me and beat me and blister my ass,
then fuck me with long neck beer bottles of glass.
But as the moon rises, a warm golden beam
enhances my skin that they've smothered with cream.
My bruises all soften; brown bristles emerge,
then claws with four paws and some fangs as I surge
with a wolf's wanton cunning,
hot blood on my breath.
I rip and I tear and I maul them to death.
In an instant I'm back. Just your sweet naked slut.
"That was fun. Take me home. Am I naughty or what?"
Submitted: April 06, 2020
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what goes around comes around. Ohhhhhh here she comes, she's a man eater!
Wed, April 8th, 2020 5:03pm
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I bet you taste good, Michael...
Wed, April 8th, 2020 8:55pm
I see this reoccurring “Simon” theme. Hmmmm
Holy shit I love the setting of this. Very visual.
Whew public anal sex, that’s bold. I need lots of prep and alcohol for it. Lol
And there’s such a twist at the end. This was incredible, as always!
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Thanks girl!
Sun, April 12th, 2020 8:58pm
I think that accurately describes how someone feels during rape, or what they imagine would happen. I really like that she goes back with Simon at the end.
Wed, June 24th, 2020 2:49pm
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Simon likes that too.
You have to be careful round here not to "romanticize" rape. I think just about every girl with whom I've ever shared my thoughts has admitted a certain fantasy about being dominated, but rape is different. It can be a thin line. I don't walk naked down too many allies these days.
Thanks for reading, girl!
Rape is touchy. As a survivor I think this is what a lot of us wish we could do at the beginning. There’s this hope at the end that is hard to see when it first happens.
Fri, June 26th, 2020 3:05pm
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I have fantasies that I hope never come true....
Fri, June 26th, 2020 8:35am
I fee that. Even after everything I still have fantasies but I think that comes more from a need of being dominated than experiencing all that again. Or maybe it’s about controlling the situation with someone I trust. Idk.
I hope you never experience that either.
THE VERY LAST SENTENCE- I THINK ITS OR WHAT WITH A LOT OF NAUGHTY .
Sat, February 6th, 2021 11:56pm
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Lots and lots of it!! Thanks for reading, SCS
Sat, February 6th, 2021 4:07pm
Now we wonder who Simon really is and if he exposed you to other men purely for your own desire for blood and revenge for what you knew would transpire. Hmmmm....
Tue, May 2nd, 2023 1:53am
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Well, Simon actually inspired this. I sort of took him on a ride...
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Extinct
That was hot and fun and thrilling
Wed, April 8th, 2020 11:18amAuthor
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I'm so glad you liked it, sweet girl!
Wed, April 8th, 2020 8:56pm