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"I don't know if I should feel excited for her or jealous, her punishment kills her and revives her and there is all that in between. Great post, very poetic and what an imagination!
So she runs in the morning, fearful of her life, I'm sure the men nap and wait for the clock to strike eight. I'm exhausted just thinking about it. Loved every word!"
Guinevere
escape from Camelot
At dawn, you saddle up your horse,

Submitted: October 20, 2019
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Well i hardly waited to see what will happen. And after the middle your poem served breathtaking views. Well done , it was really a hot read
Mon, October 21st, 2019 2:35pmI don't know if I should feel excited for her or jealous, her punishment kills her and revives her and there is all that in between. Great post, very poetic and what an imagination!
So she runs in the morning, fearful of her life, I'm sure the men nap and wait for the clock to strike eight. I'm exhausted just thinking about it. Loved every word!
A pole to dip you bring to life. To house it deep within my wife...
Would bring a pleasure unfulfilled; Raging flesh to tear the yield!
The flood of passion I could give: Held back so sad, the way I live.
Well there’s no harm in mental flight... Racing heart, a poem in night!
Gee, came back to life, did she? I guess they didn't kill her good enough? Are they gonna REALLY kill her at eight? Or she she always gonna come back to life, and they'll get to kill her over and over again?
Wed, October 30th, 2019 6:23pmYour offer fine, like potent wine, tempts mental bonds affirmed.
Yet if, in action, it were put, Damnation of my soul confirmed!
But you, my Dear, with words & flirts, do make my oldster’s heart a flutter...
Old Faithful stands, a trembling, squirts, his liquid gold-like butter!
I'll never be able to watch Excalibur again without thinking of this... wild, wild.... lusciously imagined... and fuck it... there's some jousting near us this week at an old castle... I might just go...
Mon, August 2nd, 2021 10:19amSo, a dream, a glow, caught in the snow.
Taken aback to be fucked when dead!
Then alive the very next dawn, you write such poetic hardened porn.
Love it, as usual, DM
Love it.. Xxx
Tue, August 3rd, 2021 7:52amGreat poetic tale with a twist at the end. Just my cup of tea. I loved it.
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Its a pool of eroticism!
Sun, October 20th, 2019 4:34amAuthor
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Then take your shoes off and wade in, sweet girl
Sun, October 20th, 2019 7:07pm