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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by CRWestminster

Bars...and the places they lead to

abandoned hesitation
early morning copulation
I dig my nails into the sheets
The mattress squeaks
You stretch my core
as undulations reach their peak
and leave me begging you for more
My bra and panties on the floor
play hide and seek
beyond the door
as if they've seen this room before
I don't recall just how we met
or where
I kissed you on a bet
and shared a cab that ended here
then disappeared
into the rain
I feel the pain, your penetration
jolts me forward from the rear
You never asked my name,
not even when I came
for you
I came for you
You asked me to
I saw her picture 
in a frame
She watched you fuck me
through the glass
I left a stain which too shall pass
What does she mean to you?

Submitted: June 24, 2020

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Your words strike me as sad. Unrequited throwaway love. I feel for you. I hope I am wrong and it was just as you wished it to be.

Wed, June 24th, 2020 2:58am


You nailed it, CR. But sometimes we write things that are inspired, not necessarily lived. But yes, this about dismissal and realization. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Thu, June 25th, 2020 7:31pm


great poem hun. i wonder who was in the pic too. Maybe a ex of his.

Wed, June 24th, 2020 12:01pm


The pic mentioned in the poem is actually more of a steady than an ex. If it was an ex, he wouldn't have the pic out to be seen. I wasn't specific because I think poetry is meant to be vague. This was just a one night stand and the speaker comes to the realization that she's a meaningless fuck.

Thanks for reading, girl! I've been missing you!

Thu, June 25th, 2020 7:25pm


I felt this so deeply. Love!

Wed, June 24th, 2020 2:43pm


I'm so glad! Thanks for reading!

Thu, June 25th, 2020 7:21pm


That is so very sad!
If ever you, or anyone else, were to pass through my door;
Through all your yells, or cum for me, or take my score:
Know, my Princess bright & true, without a pause I speak to you;
Even if I’m turning blue, explosive need, seeps through & through...
My heated essence overdue, you’d NOT receive, I couldn’t give;
This solemn promise I renew, “Not now, or ever, as I live...
Unless, my Dear, your name I knew!!!

(And love there was, ‘tween me and YOU! Not only lust, your bod’ to screw!!!)

So there!

Thu, June 25th, 2020 5:52am


Spy, I can't ever imagine you being a one night kind of guy, babe.
That makes me glad!
I love your poem!

Thu, June 25th, 2020 7:16pm


She obviously didn't mean much. I'm sure the one he fucked here meant more. At least in the moment.

Sun, July 5th, 2020 8:15pm


Yea, Love the one you're with...
Thanks for reading DL! I love your insight!

Sun, July 5th, 2020 9:25pm


You sure write about cheating a lot. Are you just like obsessed with infidelity?

Sun, July 5th, 2020 8:16pm


It's obsessed with me.
You sure are observant, DL.

Sun, July 5th, 2020 9:24pm

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