Cherry Coke

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by Sarah C

When we go out....

Cherry Coke


Lead on, brave steed,
up ambled stairs,
this musky room
abrupt with noise.

Let's climb until we find our chairs
above the sea
of girls and boys.

The very back,
that's what I like -
It's where we fuck
on Friday night!

Just take a seat
beside me here.
I'll make your worries disappear.
You sip your drink.
I'll suck your ear.

Pay no attention to that screen
as I go down on bended knee
and treat you, lover,
like a king!


Unlock your door, I'll set you free.
There's no place that you'd rather be
than here with me
than here with me

The eyes around us
cannot know
the utter bliss of letting go,
but in your face
I see it show...

I watch you grow -
I watch you grow!

My Cherry Coke,
your Baby Ruth,
it's what's for dinner
in this booth!

So latch me on
and grip my ass
before the final scene is cast!

We'll ride like heroes
in the wind
until our show's climactic end.
I won't pretend!
I won't pretend!
I'll feel you when your ship comes in!

 

 


Submitted: March 01, 2020

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Sarah C

Really enjoyed this, loved the imagery and cinematic theme. Good job!

Sun, March 1st, 2020 5:34pm

Author
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Thank you, Sarah! Thanks for reading!

Thu, March 5th, 2020 6:54pm

Spyguy

Sounds like you’re already preparing for my popcorn, and the baby Ruth will be melting sweetness as it packs your fudge!!!

Mon, March 2nd, 2020 8:54am

Author
Reply

Oh my, Spy...so you're gonna take it up that alley are you? It's a narrow passage, sweetness!

Thu, March 5th, 2020 6:53pm

Dick Wood

Very well written. Making cherry coke sound so erotic. Now, do one involving toothpaste. :)

Mon, March 2nd, 2020 3:35pm

Author
Reply

LOL...you have a thing for toothpaste, Dick?!!!
This is supposed to be in a movie theater. (in case it's not obvious)
I've previously posted a movie scene to make it clear, but I was in a hurry.

Thanks for reading, Dick. Actually, I do have a poem that mentions a toothbrush - have you read it?

Thu, March 5th, 2020 6:47pm

Dick Wood

Haven't read poem about toothbrush. But I have an idea what it's about.

Fri, March 6th, 2020 1:40pm

Author
Reply

Actually, I think you will be surprised. It's not focused on a toothbrush (only mentioned)
The poem is called "Secret Lover". It's free verse.

Fri, March 6th, 2020 9:06pm

Extinct

Its musical

Sat, March 7th, 2020 4:54pm

Author
Reply

Yes, it is. Do you like to go to the movies?

Sun, March 8th, 2020 8:46am

Extinct

Yes if I have company of someone I know.

Mon, March 9th, 2020 11:11am

Author
Reply

Me too!

Mon, March 9th, 2020 7:55am

DLCannon

Cherry Coke? What a coincidence. I'm drinking Coke Energy right now. Not quite exactly the same thing. But I liked this one a lot. But wasn't sure if this sex scene was some sort of fuck show for an adiance, in a sex club, or something?

Wed, April 15th, 2020 10:17pm

Author
Reply

It's meant to be date night at the movies. You know, DL, lots of things go on in the back of a dark movie theater! But you're astute in noticing that this is a bit of a performance, so the couple in question is essentially 'stealing the show' as it were. They are in fact 'performing' in front of the audience who came to watch the movie...but it's hard to ignore a couple grinding out their own personal love scene.

Thanks for reading, DL! Enjoy that Coke!

Wed, April 15th, 2020 8:34pm

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