Carnival

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by Precious Pearl

And now for something silly...

 

Carnival

 

I'll be your candy apple,

your sticky sweet serene.

You'll slide inside my ultra glide

and glaze my Krispy Kreme.

 

I taste like cotton candy.

You pound my tambourine.

I twirl my skirt.  "Please make this hurt!"

You rip me at the seam.

 

Your bumper car has busted

my cherry jelly bean.

You stretch and break my funnel cake

until I start to scream.

 

The carnival has ended.

I'm pouring like a stream.

You've won your prize between my thighs.

I lick your pretzel clean..

 


Submitted: October 09, 2020

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VanillaEssence

wow!!
when can I have a bite of THAT apple "teaser".
first dk.I desperately need the "cell" number of this chick in the artwork.
I'll pay any admission price you want to this carnival act.
I loved the every second line rhyming.It is another level.
fab poetry from a master!

Fri, October 9th, 2020 3:20am

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This 'chick' didn't leave her cell but I'll be sure to get it for you next time I visit her orchard. You should know by now, VE, that your admission is free. I'll see you in the parking lot..

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:41am

Writing_wall44

Well, that’s just all kinds of fun!

Fri, October 9th, 2020 3:33am

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Yes it is! I just love getting trapped at the top of a Ferris Wheel with a big pretzel.

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:37am

Spyguy

Scrumptious!!!

Fri, October 9th, 2020 10:48am

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Just like you...

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:35am

Sarah C

Delicious!

Fri, October 9th, 2020 9:36pm

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Thank you, Sarah!
(Do you guys have Krispy Kreme Donuts over there?)

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:34am

Storywriterx

Having my hot dog in your bun,
would be so much fun.
In your secret spot,
where you're steaming hot.
Its jumbo size,
would be a sight for your eyes.
It would be a tight fit,
going in your tight slit,
You would like it a lot,
when it hits that special spot.

Sat, October 10th, 2020 2:19am

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Meet me in the House of Mirrors, Ron...I hope you like mayo on your hotdog

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:33am

Precious Pearl

I am in love with your poetic style. Outstanding!

Sat, October 10th, 2020 12:58pm

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I'm so glad, Precious, and thank you for telling me!

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:24am

Dark Eyed Stranger

Among your best. Silky smooth and glazed with longing.

Sat, October 10th, 2020 11:44pm

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I love a nice glaze. Thanks for reading, Catnip!

Sat, October 10th, 2020 9:44pm

Silky Fox

ROFL!! Love it!!

Mon, February 15th, 2021 5:42pm

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Thank you, Silky!

Mon, February 15th, 2021 11:12am

Harriet-Jacqui Furl

All the fun of the fair! Scrumptious!

Sat, July 10th, 2021 6:16am

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I know. Why don't you come over here, and we can ride the Ferris wheel together.

Sat, July 10th, 2021 3:39pm

DLCannon

Sweet.And very descriptive. You're such a turn-on! I really do wish you were mine, sometimes.

Sun, August 1st, 2021 5:03am

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Oh, you want to bite my sweet apple, baby?
You make me blush, DL. I'll let you lick out the seeds...

Sat, July 31st, 2021 10:41pm

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