Blaze

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by benawriter

No matter where I run, you find me...

 

Blaze

 

My lover's gaze is blazing sun

 
as down abandoned beach I run
 
in search of shade,
 
of shrouded sky -
 
I shan't escape his searing eye.
 
 
 
Alas, the faster that I try
 
to flee the warmth of his embrace
 
the further still I'm lost until
 
my heart surrenders to the chase.
 
 
 
My lips surrender to the taste
 
of sweet submission's knotted twine
 
around my wrists and ankles laced
 
across his bed - then from behind
 
 
 
I feel his strength, his solemn hand;
 
the thundered crash of reprimand
 
against my cheek, across my sex.
 
And as he swings, my muscles flex
 
 
 
a tightly dimpled glowing ass
 
that flinches with his every pass.
 
His fiery fingers singe my mound
 
and melt my cotton candied down
 
till dripping syrup soaks the sheets.
 
Resistance fails; restraint retreats.
 
 
 
His tongue against my throbbing pearl
 
has lashed my gash
 
has dipped and swirled.
 
While pink ambrosia fills the air,
 
my essence gushes everywhere!
 
 
 
Then standing tall, this gallant steed
 
impales my well of aching need.
 
Relentless Thrusts - Euphoric Pain
 
My core is pouring out his name!
 
 
 
Drained and sated, love's lament
 
hath soothed the fire of discontent.
 
I weep where weeping's wants are learned
 
and bask in everlasting burn...


Submitted: September 28, 2019

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benawriter

I think I understand the passion and gratification of being used....nicely done, girl.

Sat, September 28th, 2019 4:04pm

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I think you do too...thank you, Ben

Sat, September 28th, 2019 11:24am

Trixie

Very lovely post.

Sat, September 28th, 2019 8:06pm

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Thank you, Trix

Sun, September 29th, 2019 8:48am

Extinct

Passionate and hot

Sun, September 29th, 2019 2:21am

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Thank you, Extinct

Sun, September 29th, 2019 8:49am

Dick Wood

Very well written. Every line had passion and eroticism in it.

Sun, September 29th, 2019 4:55am

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Thank you, Dick!

Sun, September 29th, 2019 8:51am

breakfast@Lola's

Great imagery. Hot sexual stuff. I loved it.

Mon, October 7th, 2019 3:43am

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I'm so glad, girl! Thanks for reading!

Mon, October 7th, 2019 6:09pm

scs2141949

I gotta tell ya' - this fits in v ery much with my current thinking. Thanks and keep up the good work!

Fri, July 24th, 2020 3:18am

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You’re thinking about giving me a spanking? Burn it up, sweetie..,

Fri, July 24th, 2020 8:36am

The Old Punt

Your poetry is sheer class,
My mind seared with thoughts of the dimpled ass,
An erotic treat for the memory bank,
The greatest compliment is I need a....

Tue, August 4th, 2020 1:12pm

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Kiss?....oh, that doesn't rhyme does it. Hmmmmm (LOL)
Thanks for reading this, you sweet man!

Tue, August 4th, 2020 6:35pm

Spyguy

I you could spank, then fill with shank, though love to please, could call you skank!
I’d plow your field, and test your yield, fill ALL your holes, my sword to wield!!!
When then you woke, again I’d poke, if withered pole, you can provoke!

Sat, October 10th, 2020 2:29am

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Oh, I'll provoke it all right!
Thank you for your poetic response, Merman. I love your comments!

Sat, October 10th, 2020 10:32am

Lizziewolf

Wow, seems to be a great encounter, full of hot passion!

Sun, October 11th, 2020 11:24pm

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Yea, definitely! Ya know, this piece reminds me of you a bit because of your intrigue in the submission department. With this SMBD stuff, there always seems to be a game of chase...a sort of cat and mouse scenario

Sun, October 11th, 2020 4:36pm

Goddess Monae

Only 590 reads?!?!?!?! I’m fighting somebody lol.

Sun, December 20th, 2020 7:52pm

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Hello, Goddess! Well, maybe you're lucky 591
Who are you fighting?
Thanks for dropping by to see me!

Wed, December 23rd, 2020 7:52pm

Spyguy

Burn baby burn, and while you’re at it you can learn , the lines I pen must have a start, from feelings shared; a need impart!!

Mon, June 28th, 2021 5:26am

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Thank you, Spy! This is actually one of my own favorites.

Mon, June 28th, 2021 3:58pm

IceBreaker

Fuck, I don’t know what to say. I’m not much of a poem reader usually but this was interesting. Tell me if I’m wrong but the relationship between the two of them seem to be toxic considering this line: “I feel his strength, his solid hand; the thundered crash against my cheek, across my cheek.” But something tells me that she likes it anyway. She likes it but she doesn’t want to like it. At least that’s the way I perceive it.
Great job. I enjoyed it

Tue, July 6th, 2021 7:18am

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First of all, thanks so much for reading that. There aren't very many poem readers around here, and I don't bug people to read them if it's not their thing.

The initial part of the poem is meant to portray attempted escape, but as the poem continues, it becomes evident there is no escape...not because it's physically impossible but because it's emotionally impossible. "The thundered crash of reprimand" is an allusion to punishment for attempted escape, but as you astutely noted, it is something the speaker actually wants. The whole thing is meant to mirror the odd 'cat and mouse' turmoil which accompanies bdsm relationships. Subjectively, it's hard to comprehend as you observe it from afar...but within the confines of the relationship itself, there's an understanding.

I didn't intend for the relationship to appear toxic so much as I intended the speaker to come to a realization that she was running from something she really wanted. And, in the end, I wanted the reader to wonder if the whole thing wasn't just a game or an act to invoke punishment she actually enjoys. That's the essence of the Sub/Dom experience.

Thanks so much for reading this, girl!

Tue, July 6th, 2021 4:30pm

Harriet-Jacqui xx

I find this so sexy, Kitten - your craving image excites!

Wed, July 7th, 2021 5:49am

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Thank you, HJ! I'm really glad you like it!

Wed, July 7th, 2021 8:59pm

DLCannon

Very erotic! Sounds like a HOT fuck! (;

Fri, July 9th, 2021 9:42pm

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Oh yea, lots of heat! I've been working on my page today, trying to get it back in order.
Thanks for dropping by to chase me down the beach, DL. You can spank me but please don't cut my head off.

Fri, July 9th, 2021 10:27pm

erotimatica

Pretty sexy.

Fri, July 16th, 2021 3:59pm

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Thank you!

Fri, July 16th, 2021 1:18pm

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