Be Gentle

Reads: 934  | Likes: 1  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 10

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by Trixie

Okay....if that's what you want

Be Gentle
 
 
 
 
 
My darkest door is very tight;
 
rarely used for what you like,
 
but with persuasion, you may find
 
I'll want your cock up my behind
 
 
 
The glisten from your tiny slit
 
is just enough - please put a bit
 
inside the sphincter of my rose,
 
then with your finger, I suppose,
 
 
 
you might relax my puckered hole
 
enough to fit your massive pole.
 
My friends say squirting's easy when
 
a prick gets shoved up your rear end
 
 
 
So, bend me over. Spread my cheeks
 
and pump me till my pussy leaks.
 
I'll squeeze your balls to make you last,
 
then beg you, "Please cum in my ass."


Submitted: April 04, 2020

© Copyright 2021 DampKitten. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

Spyguy

Well you got my attention fast, I’d love to tell you I would last...
I know I’d try, but that’s so sweet, I’m just not sure I’m that elite?!?
But girl I know that I’d just die, to give that little hole a try;
And I’d go slow until you begged, to have that creaming g-spot pegged!!!
But I am here and you are there, and I’m not sure girl if you care~~
You tease me, promise, titillate, make brain and manhood palpitate...
This rod of steel goes down to sleep, when only dreams he gets to reap!

Sat, April 4th, 2020 10:59am

Author
Reply

Awe, Spy...I'm sure you are quite elite and certainly I care! And that was a lovely reply as always.
What if I crawl through your window tonight and see about this palpitation you're having? Maybe you should take the sheet down and leave it out in the moonlight where I can better examine it. A nurse's work is never done....

Sat, April 4th, 2020 6:02pm

benawriter

My mind is too aroused to send an eloquent reply as did Spyguy, but I concur - your invitation is too seductive to resist, oh sexy one. I'm sure there's a long line at your rear......

Sat, April 4th, 2020 1:15pm

Author
Reply

Then don't resist it. No lines at my rear, but I'd like something long (now that you've mentioned it)

Sat, April 4th, 2020 5:56pm

Dick Wood

Very hot and imaginative poem. Maybe a little more description in describing persuasion such as tonguing and fingering that inviting puckered hole.

Sat, April 4th, 2020 2:04pm

Author
Reply

Oh, you'd like me to be more descriptive, Dick? Well, I'll have to work on that. I guess that takes practice. Plus, I was rushing to get my panties down...

Sat, April 4th, 2020 5:53pm

Trixie

Great piece, what a way to ask. I don’t have the right tools but If I did I would have to oblige your request.

Sun, April 5th, 2020 1:41am

Author
Reply

Tools are available...
and I'm flattered!!

Sat, April 4th, 2020 9:44pm

DarkHorse93

*ALL HAIL DK!!* We shall bend knee and bow at thy greatness, you sexy writer you! ;) So this is something new then I assume for you? Something a bit 'different' shall we say? "My darkest door is very tight." There's something about that line that really speaks volumes, Maybe it's the way you described it, using words like darkest, door and tight! I get imagery of a door found under a castle in the Middle Ages, where no soul is to step foot. But this chap you speak of is a very lucky man indeed, especially that with a wee bit of persuasion, you won't mind his meat up your rear! ;p

There's something about the way you describe things, it's just so damn beautiful! How do you do it DK!? "Inside the sphincter of my rose." It brings about such elegant yet very sensual imagery. You have the ability to write about things in a way, where they're beautiful and incredible and sexy and alluring all at once. And I like how the second stanza is pretty laid back and then the third stanza builds up to the crescendo of the fourth stanza, where it's time to get down and dirty with the good stuff! "Pump me till my pussy leaks." Sexy as hell! What fabulous imagery, not to mention the alliteration too!

I know that anal is probably a bit of a grey area for a lot of people. But the way you write this piece DK, you make it seem fun and exciting, enthralling and delicious, sensual and alluring! Thank you as always, for sharing your masterpieces with us all! ;)

Sun, April 5th, 2020 2:14pm

Author
Reply

You’re comments leave me breathless as an anal thrust, DH! I’m just panting through the paragraphs. You have no idea. Thank you...Thank you...Thank you!

Sun, April 5th, 2020 7:59am

Storywriterx

Your poem my hear has stolen, my cock is now swollen.
Would it be a sin, to ask youif I can cum in.
That dark place, and put a smile upon your face.
It's thick and long, and I last real long.
My cock it would please, to feel it squeeze.
Its throbbing shaft, while I blast.
You full of my cum, while we have some naughty fun.
It's creamy and thick, when it shoots out of my dick.
It will make your hole slick, as in and out I slip.
It will make my heart soar aloft, when it doesn't go soft.
And I feel your body shiver then quake, when your cunt doth awake.
And your sweet juices flow, down on my balls below.



Sat, April 18th, 2020 11:35am

Author
Reply

Awe, you've got me quivering for adventure, Ron...
Are you sure you can get all that in my tiny little Cocoa canal?
You know how to sing a girl into bending over...

Sat, April 18th, 2020 8:16pm

Storywriterx

I've got the key to your back door, need I say more.
It will make you sing, when I use that big thing.
Or maybe make you hum, when it's in your bum.
And maybe make you shout, please don't take it out.
Squirt down all over my balls, while you take it all.
Making you cum, will be so much fun.
It might be a tight fit, but we'll make it fit.

Mon, April 20th, 2020 3:47pm

Author
Reply

The 'key' to my back door? I like that!
I'm sure it will make me do all those things!

Mon, April 20th, 2020 6:04pm

massageguy

So sexy, love the meter and rhyme scheme...

I thank you from the heart of my bottom. Or, y'know, yours...

Wed, August 19th, 2020 4:10pm

Author
Reply

And I thank you, Massage Boy! Thanks for reading and fanning me!

Thu, August 20th, 2020 6:27pm

Other Content by DampKitten

Short Story / Literary Erotica

Book / True Confessions

Poem / Adult Romance