pity thy love sky
Poem by: crystall
Seeking the earth
The sky searched her upto the horizon
But an illusion it all was
Coz its impossible
The sky spread searching to meet her yet
Pity thy love sky
The earth doesnt reflect
She curves away always
And still you keep chasing her
You thunder and roar And
finally flood down tears
Still when the sky feels an empty heart
Rainbows are born out of her sorrow...
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I think the last line of this, C, is just gorgeous. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Thanks Amy
I felt that too ;when the line was born it touched my heart
So beautiful personal the deepest poems are born from the brightest things.Just Perfection :)
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Thank you sweets
Am glad you like it
Am actually very very happy
I love that youu liked it!!
This is fantastically beautiful, somewhat mysterious, potentially metaphorical, and poetically enticing. I agree with Amy, the last two lines are an amazing finish, and uplifting. There are certain things that are unreachable, yet there is beauty and magic surrounding that inaccessibility.
There's a song by James Blunt called "You're beautiful"....your poem reminds me of it.
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Thank you soo much G
I am so glad that you appreciated this poem
When you cant attain somethings that your heart beats for then weeps for we feel desperate we seek for the tiniest of hopes to make impossibles happen but we grow more restless
The last line when striked my mind
Thats what made me calm down when silent tears help the heart to fwipe off the dark stains from madness and desperation..
Lol lots of thanks G for such a sweet and lovely comment and i listened to the song the song is nice..
Amy F. Turner