Her lover and Her
Poem by: crystall
In the woods
I saw her lover and her
Moving in synchrony
Producing some symphony
Unknown unseen unimaginable unique
love
Jealousy split me apart
My demons whispered
My heart becoming venomous
Writhing in pain
Then flying like a hawk
I became a predator
Stalking her
But
She had me enchanted and lost
Sanity now ripped away from my mind
By the dark demons
Licking my wounds with angry fire
Abandoned never loved
Born never lived
I was nothing
Until
I saw her
Speak sweet words to me
But my heart mocked my mind
Made me feel things for her
That shall never be returned
She was an angel, a fair princess Nature her attire
Sweet melody
My peace and serenity
What shall I do!
Am tired
Of seeking still persuading
This Goddess of mine.
Ah! the pain of being an anonymous,
She never was mine
Though I have become hers..
Look! those soft hands
Grasping someone else palms
Should I end my flight...
© Copyright 2017 crystall. All rights reserved.
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Fear, anger, resentment, surprise, love, desire and then frustration. Very powerful, tragic.
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Thank you Ben!!
Am glad you read and commented!!
Life is so puzzled!
We go through a real emotional gambit on the wings of unrequited love. There are images here that are sharp and illustrate the emotions felt. Love this vivid piece, C. :)
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Thank you Amy !
Am so happy that Amazing Amy loves this!!
Hugs x
Thank you really very much!!
"Lost and delirious" After writing this I realised I have had its hawk inspire me...
Love it shall
Hunt down my heart
make me bleed
emotions
crazy feelings sewing notions
in mind
Thou shall not live
With joy..
This is absolutely fantastic, Crystall! How interesting you should materialize yourself as a hawk...bird of prey...quiet and stealth and deadly. A bird's eye view. You see everything. Even the things you don't want to see. "But my heart mocked my mind"...Wow!!!
"Moving in synchrony, producing some symphony"....love, love, love that line!
I see some alliteration in this piece!
It's enchanting, like the forest...and night is falling. What sinister things will happen in the dark dark woods?
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Thànk you so much G
What more sinister then what the hawak had already seen.. the woman and her lover she saw them moving together -you know what it means...
She heard their symphony -sighs and moans...
The hawk can take no more if any more sinister could happen..
She is thinking upon ending her flight
As her dead body will fall her journey will cease..
Thank you very much G x
If you have never seen it, I recommend for you to find a way to go see "Ladyhawk" it is an amazing movie that comes to mind as I read this masterpiece of yours! I miss my sweet Crystal coming over to Booksie & reading & commenting on my works!
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Am sorry Spyguy
Thank you
I love this!!! Great emotion
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Thank you so much Krea !!! Am so happy that you love it :-))
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