Dane

Short Story by: Britt Nicole

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All Malina does is work and school. She has no time for men. But Dane won't have that.

I rolled my eyes as my roommate continued to chastised me. "I'm mean seriously Lina, you never go out with us! You work, go to school, come home, eat, tv, sleep, repeat!"

"Jayla stop it!" I laughed and breathed out loudly. "I'll go next time I promise okay?! I have to study for my test on Monday. Next weekend I promise we'll go nuts!"

Jayla stared at me with squinted eyes before signing. "Fine, but just remember you'll be missing a hell of a time." She walked back into her room and I plopped on my bed, opening my text book.

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Bang. Bang. Bang.

I woke up startled to the sound of banging on the door. I quickly put on my robe and ran to open the door. As soon as I did there was a man holding a plastered girl.

Jayla.

I sighed. "Dammit Jayla!" I looked at the man and had to hold in my gasp. He was...well gorgeous. He was insanely tall and had raven black hair with intoxicating hazel eyes. I mentally shook my head and glared at Jayla. "What the hell? You're not seventeen anymore Jayla! What if this nice man wasn't there??"

Jayla giggled and looked at me with glossed over eyes. "T-t-that's my big fat silly brother!!!"

I let them inside. "Doesn't matter, your brother shouldn't have to pick you up for being so messy!"

The man chuckled. "it's alright, really. Jayla is...."

"Jayla." I said and we both laughed. "Her room is right there!" They went in and I rubbed my eyes and sat down in the dining room. Soon Jayla's brother came out and smiled at me. "How is she?"

"She'll have a killer headache in the morning but other than that she should be fine." He said and held out his hand. "Dane."

I shook it and smiled. "Malina, but everyone calls me Lina." I got up and walked into the kitchen. "You want some coffee? I'm up now."

"Uh, yeah sure." He smiled and I couldn't help but stare, damn, did I say gorgeous ? I meant sexy God. I turned quickly and started making it.

"So," I said, "I didn't know she was going out with you tonight."

"Well I was suppose to meet my date there, but she couldn't come."

For some reason I felt something...jealousy maybe? "Oh really? How come?"

"You tell me." I turned around to see Dane giving me an amused look.

My eyes bulged out. "Wait...you were there for...." I squinted my eyebrows. "Me?" It came out more as a squeak. Dane nodded and waited for my answer. "Oh I'm sorry, I didn't even know about any of this and I just really needed to study and...." I stopped and pouted as he was laughing at me. "What's so funny?"

Dane smirked and walked closer to me. I felt myself back up against the sink. "I'm laughing because you're cute. I like you, Lina, a lot."

I gave him a confused look. "Y-you don't even know me?"

"On the contrary, I know a lot about you. My sister's been trying to get us together for almost a year now."

"What?!" I gasped. "Where the hell have I been??" I shook my head and noticed Dane was awfully close.

He stared at my eyes, then my lips, down to my breasts, and then my legs to look back up at me. "She showed me pictures, but that's nothing compared to in person. God, you're stunning."

I felt heat raise up my neck. I bit my lip, trying to wrap my head around all this. "So...you've liked me for a year now?"

Dane nodded. "Yes, and I would love if you would give me the chance. Because frankly, I already see you as mine in my eyes." He said huskily and now his chest was touching mine.

My breathing began to quicken and I swallowed hard. "O-okay..."

Dane broke out into a beautiful smile and he captured my lips. What am I doing?! I don't kiss guys I don't know! But this was different, I felt as if kissing Dane was...right. I leaned forward,deepening the kiss and his hands lightly squeezed my thighs. The wetness between my legs began to grow immensely.

He looked into my eyes. "Lina, I am asking permission to touch you. But be warned, once you give me the green light I don't think I can stop."

I gasped and bit my lip, causing him to groan. "I-I don't know I mean..we just met and...and I don't usually...."

Dane pulled me closer. "No other man will touch you." He said aggressively and nipped at my throat."

"God.." I moaned. Fuck it. "Y-yes...."

He lifted his head up to look at me in the eyes. "What?"

I breathed out slowly. "Yes, Dane."

Just then I was hoisted up, my legs wrapped around his waist. "Baby ima make you feel so good." He kicked my door open and gently placed me on my bed.

"H-how did you know where my room was?" The way he was looking at me I didn't know if I should feel excited or nervous. Perhaps both.

Dane chuckled. "It's the only other room."

I felt my face heating up. "Oh yea, ha, oops."

"Lay on the bed okay angel?" He licked his lips. "And don't move." I obeyed and scooted myself. I laid my head on my pillow, not noticing my breathing became rigid and quickened. He slowly lifted his shirt above his head and threw it next to him.

Holy. Mother. Of God. He looked like he was Michael Angelo's muse. Perfect chiseled torso and that V line...."wow!!" I accidentally said out loud.

Dane smiled and seemed to get bigger, as if my compliment effected him in a way. He then took his jeans off and was just in his Calvin Klein. My eyes bulged at the sight of the size of his cock. My pussy lips began to quiver with anticipation. He was now hovering over me, slowly untying my robe. He pushed it so he could see me in nothing but my boy shorts.

"Fuck." He groaned and licked his lips. "Your breasts look good enough to eat...not too big...not to small." Dane pinched my nipples causing fire to erupt down under. His lips captured mine and the feeling was overwhelming. He pulled away and just barely licked my left nipple. I sucked in a breath and bit the inside of my cheek. Finally his entire mouth attacked it with so much want and fierceness I thought I was going to pass out.

"Dane.....fuck I....I can't..." I couldn't even fucking finish!!

He then did the exact same to the other nipple. By now my pussy's so wet I feel it soaking my underwear. As if reading my mind his hand cupped my pussy and squeezed. He let out a moan and licked his fingers. "Fuck I need to be inside of you." He then ripped my underwear off of me and helped me sit up to take off the robe. He took off his boxer briefs and I shook my head.

"Er....you think that's gunna fit?!"

He sensed my nervousness and kissed me so soft and gentle. "Trust me, I'll make it fit. Now Angel, I'm going to have you laying against the bed with your ass in front of me okay?" I nodded and got off the bed to lean against it. His hands were rubbing ass slowly before smacking it. The sound bounced off the walls along with my gasp. Before I could process anything I felt the tip of his cock near my entrance. "All mine.." He growled before slowly putting it in.

Fuck!! I gong think I've ever fucked someone so big. His size stretched my walls as he moved back and forth. "God..." I managed to groan. "Yes....Dane that's so good."

"You like that baby? When my cock fills your pussy? Lina you were made for me...I just know it." His pace quickened and I now couldn't control the mangled words coming out of my mouth. His cock then slipped out and he turned me to look at him. "I want to look at you while I fuck you." He picked me up and pushed me against the wall. His cock filled me once again but this time it felt tighter.

"Mother fucker!" I yelled and gripped his shoulders as he fucked the living shit out of me. "Keep fucking me Dane!"

"With pleasure baby." He grunted before walked and placing me back on the bed on my back without exiting my throbbing pussy. I bucked my hips as he thrusted hard and fast.

I could feel my pussy clench around Dane's cock. "Fuck I'm going to...gahhh Dane Ima cum!"

He smirked before going so fast it set me over the edge, my pussy juice leaking around his cock. "Fuck!!" He yelled before pulling out and I

his seed spill all over my stomach. We stood there breathing hard before he smiled. "So beautiful."

I bit my lip and smiled back at him. "So hot."

At that he laughed and pulled legs so I was at the edge of the bed. "How about round two in the shower, girlfriend ?"

The glint in his eyes made butterflies swarm through my stomach. I smirked and lightly touched his cock with my foot, causing him to moan. "Sounds good, boyfriend."

Submitted: March 27, 2015

General Erotica

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Alyson Williams

Haven't finished your other story yet but wanted to start this one so I can keep up with the chapters. He sure claimed her fast! Quite steamy, I must say. A few spelling errors, and paragraph problems made it a bit more difficult to read but a little editing will fix that. I look forward to where this goes.

Fri, March 27th, 2015 10:21pm

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Okay thank you :)!!

Fri, March 27th, 2015 6:03pm

zebo85

I agree with Aly; as I do so often! About this being steamy. His long awaited meeting with her that she didn't even know about made this really hot. Wonderful story!

Sat, March 28th, 2015 1:57pm

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Thankyou :)!!

Sat, March 28th, 2015 11:02am

floralonskie

That girlfriend-boyfriend thingy is so freaking sweet to hear! Well, I'll wait to what comes next. :) Good job!

Fri, April 10th, 2015 3:53pm

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thanks:)

Thu, April 23rd, 2015 10:28am

Krystal Clear

Really creative and ho so sexy. Love your writing. ~Krystal ........[A fire has been lit]

Thu, May 7th, 2015 2:41am

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Thank you so much :)!

Fri, May 8th, 2015 9:06pm

Storywriterx

This was so hot I was too busy trying to see what was going to happen next that I never noticed any spelling or paragraph mistakes.
You just got yourself a new fan with this.
XoxoX. SWx

Thu, September 28th, 2017 12:34pm