Touched By A Vampire's Kiss
Poem by: breakfast@Lola's
Touched by a Vampire’s Kiss
The beast of the night stalks the darkness,
Searching for its next victim,
It’s heart empty and bloodless,
Ready to feed on a plump blossom,
The slums of the streets consume its passion,
The people unware of the danger amongst them,
Asian blood echoes its senses to attention,
A woman with blood so pure it can’t condemn,
He follows her lust into an alley way,
Ready to strike at all cost,
It’s time to play,
As it nears its feast,
The exotic beauty cries out in the night,
It corners its food,
She puts up a fright,
No match for its fumes,
Bits into her flesh,
She gasps for air,
Sweet honey suckle of fresh breast,
Adrenaline of fire,
Elevation of desire,
The beast drinks its full,
Her vein is drained as her last breath cries,
Her neck snaps after it's fill,
She falls to the ground with no mind,
The beast of the night escapes out of sight.
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This was amazing just excellent I loved it you know girl I love my vamps. That was awesome!!!!
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Thank you girly! I love my vamps too. LOL!
Watch your back at night Ify. I'm going to sneak up behind you and bite your neck. Or maybe your bum Or maybe your boobs. Or maybe your...... Or maye all of you, not sure where yet. ;-))
I vant to drink your blood.
XoxoX Ron.
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LOL! I'm sure my blood taste sweeter than sugar. :)
fabulous "word pictures" of a murky world that makes the senses "alert"
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Thank you Richie, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This was scary! I totally loved it! Vampires are beasts, too, and I just cannot get enough of them. Great job here, girlie!
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Thank you hun yes they are the beasts of the night.
So he's just gonna leave her like that? Geez, he's out just to get his. Beast or not ugh, typical male, lol
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Lol, vampire nor male mortals have no emotion. Their both very horrible beings. Thanks nitie.
Quite a tragic story! But I guess that is what vampire stories are! You did a great job on this poem, I do believe that you have poetry within you!
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Thanks, I try!
'Ready to feed on a plump blossom'....oh wow! I like that phrase.
'Sweet honey-suckle of fresh breast'.....even better!
What is it about vamps that are such a fucking turn on! I can't figure it out, but it makes me want to drop my panties....and all they want is my neck.
I love this piece, girl!
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Lol your funny. I don’t know it is about vamps. Everybody loves them and loves to write about them I guess it their sexual side that people can’t get enough of. I know I can’t.
I see I am not the only one who gets inspires by the sink of a vampire's fang. I love the poem, and the title.
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Thank you hun! I’m glad you liked it.;)
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