Supernova

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

A little Poem about the supernova of the sun!

Supernova

T he yellow light peaks out of the atmosphere,

H eavens of heated rays engulf our earth,

E nveloping with UV rays in our hemisphere,

S unshine ablaze at its birth,

U nder the clouds its yellow peak shines brighter with growth,

N earing man-kind as it rotates around our hearth,

I nside blistering fire of troth,

S corches of heat in the center of its heart,

A ffecting man-kind with its molecules,

B urning our pigment with rays of discoloration,

L ight, we use as modules,

A scend our home in acceleration,

Z inc in our pigment,

E lements to heal.

 

COMMENTS ARE WELCOME!


Submitted: June 18, 2017

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Storywriterx

This is something different from your norm. Acrostic poems are hard towrite. You did a very good job on this one.
XoxoX Ron

Sun, June 18th, 2017 4:38am

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Thank you Ron, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was hard to write, but I tried!

Sat, June 17th, 2017 10:44pm

kalelthemith

Nice.

Sun, June 18th, 2017 7:30am

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Thank you hun!

Sun, June 18th, 2017 5:07am

Amy F. Turner

Wonderful and vivid. Very nice, Lola!

Sun, June 18th, 2017 2:42pm

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Thank you Amy!

Sun, June 18th, 2017 9:16am

DLCannon

Big words, I am not usually a know-it-all of but I like this piece. :)

Tue, June 20th, 2017 12:21am

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Thank you!

Mon, June 19th, 2017 5:49pm

Spyguy

I very much like this creative poem! I like your use of color, your descriptions, & the flow of it! Sometimes these Acrostic poems can be pretty difficult to accomplish, so I also give you credit for being able to tie all of your thoughts together! Over all, a very nice work...

Thu, June 22nd, 2017 7:47pm

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Thank you spy, it was challenging to write about the supernova of the sun. Although the sun never gets to supernova form. It's just a scientific myth that the sun can be in supernova form one day. I guess when that time comes, we wouldn't have a sun anymore because it would have exploded in the end and I guess the earth will be covered in pitch darkness. Lol. Thanks again spy.

Thu, June 22nd, 2017 1:27pm

Eadigoo

I love your poem Lola ....and you really did do your homework on exploding Stars in this one. I look at your words as a contemplation on existence and eventually being Re-Absorbed into the natural make up of the Universe . Our Molecules , 4 Billion years from now , will again be part of the creation of a new Planet, Star...back to our most basic selves....a collection of chemicals and minerals which Magically come to life when the Special ingredient is added and makes something very special from nothing.....This will be our Rebirth , as part of some new World , in the soil, the trees, the clouds on some yet to be created World.....our Bodies are the "Seed Corn" of the Universe.
Matter cannot be destroyed ...only Transformed.
Astronomy was / is my Favorite subject, in case you didn't guess lol..

Fri, June 23rd, 2017 8:19am

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Thank you Eamon for that insightful knowledge of information. I love astronomy also. I really need to study it more though. Thanks a lot, your thoughts on my work means so much.

Fri, June 23rd, 2017 4:35am

Aurora M. Soleado

Loving those font-color changes at the beginning of each line and what it spells. Nice acrostic!

Mon, August 14th, 2017 1:37am

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Thanks hun!

Mon, August 14th, 2017 6:08pm

Spyguy

"The Sun is Ablaze", & so are you with ''tis one girl!

Thu, October 12th, 2017 8:51pm

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Lol ;)

Fri, October 13th, 2017 5:57pm

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