Supernova
Poem by: breakfast@Lola's
Supernova
T he yellow light peaks out of the atmosphere,
H eavens of heated rays engulf our earth,
E nveloping with UV rays in our hemisphere,
S unshine ablaze at its birth,
U nder the clouds its yellow peak shines brighter with growth,
N earing man-kind as it rotates around our hearth,
I nside blistering fire of troth,
S corches of heat in the center of its heart,
A ffecting man-kind with its molecules,
B urning our pigment with rays of discoloration,
L ight, we use as modules,
A scend our home in acceleration,
Z inc in our pigment,
E lements to heal.
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I liked what you did with this very creative just amazing writing loved. It!!!!
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Thank you psych, I'm glad you liked it!
This is something different from your norm. Acrostic poems are hard towrite. You did a very good job on this one.
XoxoX Ron
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Thank you Ron, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was hard to write, but I tried!
sounds like you have done your homework on the impending expansion of our natural sun in about 4 Billion years time to obliterate our earth.By then mankind will have left this planet and be busy creating artificial suns and satellites because nuclear FUSION will then be a reality making our natural suns obsolete. Or have I missed the point of this enlightening poem entirely lol!!!!
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I was actually talking about the sun, but according to scientist, the sun can not be a supernova because it does not have enough mass to become a supernova. Other single stars can become supernova. I think you are on point with this poem Richie!
Nice.
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Thank you hun!
Wonderful and vivid. Very nice, Lola!
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Thank you Amy!
Big words, I am not usually a know-it-all of but I like this piece. :)
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Thank you!
I very much like this creative poem! I like your use of color, your descriptions, & the flow of it! Sometimes these Acrostic poems can be pretty difficult to accomplish, so I also give you credit for being able to tie all of your thoughts together! Over all, a very nice work...
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Thank you spy, it was challenging to write about the supernova of the sun. Although the sun never gets to supernova form. It's just a scientific myth that the sun can be in supernova form one day. I guess when that time comes, we wouldn't have a sun anymore because it would have exploded in the end and I guess the earth will be covered in pitch darkness. Lol. Thanks again spy.
I love your poem Lola ....and you really did do your homework on exploding Stars in this one. I look at your words as a contemplation on existence and eventually being Re-Absorbed into the natural make up of the Universe . Our Molecules , 4 Billion years from now , will again be part of the creation of a new Planet, Star...back to our most basic selves....a collection of chemicals and minerals which Magically come to life when the Special ingredient is added and makes something very special from nothing.....This will be our Rebirth , as part of some new World , in the soil, the trees, the clouds on some yet to be created World.....our Bodies are the "Seed Corn" of the Universe.
Matter cannot be destroyed ...only Transformed.
Astronomy was / is my Favorite subject, in case you didn't guess lol..
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Thank you Eamon for that insightful knowledge of information. I love astronomy also. I really need to study it more though. Thanks a lot, your thoughts on my work means so much.
Loving those font-color changes at the beginning of each line and what it spells. Nice acrostic!
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Thanks hun!
"The Sun is Ablaze", & so are you with ''tis one girl!
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Lol ;)
An Acrostic! That's very very good! The sun is such a metaphorical item in poetry....lends itself to a lot of comparisons and analogies. I love how you use it here.
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Thanks hun, I just thought the sun would make a great poem.
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