My Best Friend's Brother

My Best Friend's Brother

Status: In Progress

Genre: Romance

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Status: In Progress

Genre: Romance

Summary

SUMMARY: LOLA RIVERS IS NOT YOUR TYPICAL NERDISH GOODY GOODY SCHOOL GIRL. SHE LOVES TO PLAY SOCCER AND LOVES TO SING AND ACT IN DRAMA MUSICALS AT HER SCHOOL. HER BEST FRIEND, VANNESSA DALTON IS YOUR TYPICAL POPULAR SEXY CHEERLEADER WHO LOVES FASHION AND LOVES TO HANG OUT AT THE MALL. ALTHOUGH THEY ARE DIFFERENT IN MANY WAYS, THEY ARE BOTH EACH OTHER’S BESTFRIEND AND SUPPORTER. THEY BOTH LIVE NEXT DOOR TO EACH OTHER AND HAS KNOWN EACH OTHER SINCE THEY WERE IN DIPPERS. VANNESSA’S OLDER BROTHER, RICARDO DALTON IS HOT SEXY AND COOL. HE IS THE POPULAR SPORTS JOCK IN SCHOOL AND ALL THE LADIES WANT TO BREAK OFF A PIECE OF HIM. HE IS LOLA’S SECRET CRUSH SINCE THEY WERE KIDS. BUT OF-COURSE HE IS TWO YEARS OLDER THAN LOLA AND ALSO GRAUDUATING THIS COMING SPRING. BEFORE HE HEADS OFF TO COLLAGE, LOLA ONLY WISH IS TO FINALLY TELL HIM HOW SHE FEELS ABOUT HIM. HOPEFULLY HE GETS THE HINT AND GIVES HER A CHANCE INTO HIS HEART. BUT THE QUESTION IS, HOW CAN SHE MAKE A GUY SHE GREW UP WITH, SEE HER DIFFERENTLY THAN JUST HIS LITTLE SISTER’S DORKY BESTFRIEND?

Summary

SUMMARY: LOLA RIVERS IS NOT YOUR TYPICAL NERDISH GOODY GOODY SCHOOL GIRL. SHE LOVES TO PLAY SOCCER AND LOVES TO SING AND ACT IN DRAMA MUSICALS AT HER SCHOOL. HER BEST FRIEND, VANNESSA DALTON IS YOUR TYPICAL POPULAR SEXY CHEERLEADER WHO LOVES FASHION AND LOVES TO HANG OUT AT THE MALL. ALTHOUGH THEY ARE DIFFERENT IN MANY WAYS, THEY ARE BOTH EACH OTHER’S BESTFRIEND AND SUPPORTER. THEY BOTH LIVE NEXT DOOR TO EACH OTHER AND HAS KNOWN EACH OTHER SINCE THEY WERE IN DIPPERS. VANNESSA’S OLDER BROTHER, RICARDO DALTON IS HOT SEXY AND COOL. HE IS THE POPULAR SPORTS JOCK IN SCHOOL AND ALL THE LADIES WANT TO BREAK OFF A PIECE OF HIM. HE IS LOLA’S SECRET CRUSH SINCE THEY WERE KIDS. BUT OF-COURSE HE IS TWO YEARS OLDER THAN LOLA AND ALSO GRAUDUATING THIS COMING SPRING. BEFORE HE HEADS OFF TO COLLAGE, LOLA ONLY WISH IS TO FINALLY TELL HIM HOW SHE FEELS ABOUT HIM. HOPEFULLY HE GETS THE HINT AND GIVES HER A CHANCE INTO HIS HEART. BUT THE QUESTION IS, HOW CAN SHE MAKE A GUY SHE GREW UP WITH, SEE HER DIFFERENTLY THAN JUST HIS LITTLE SISTER’S DORKY BESTFRIEND?

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Submitted: December 08, 2018

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Lola Rivers: 
Lola Rivers: Your typical sixteen-year-old dorky sophomore. She is very pretty and smart. She loves sports as well as plays soccer and loves to sing in the school’s musical theatre plays. She also loves to hang out with her best friend, Vanessa Dolton, who is the complete opposite of Lola. Nessa loves her stylish girly fashion and tries to get Lola more into fashion. She doesn’t like Lola’s plain jane style. She thinks Lola needs to dress more sexier than her typical vintage clothing, which includes her vintage long flowy skirts and crop tops, casual over-all’s, retro denim jeans, knee length socks, vintage dresses, T-shirts, and sneakers. Vanessa would rather have her dress more like her, especially if she wants to catch the eyes of Nessa’s brother, Ricardo Dolton.

Vanessa Dalton:


Vanessa Dolton: Your typical popular cheerleader. She is the captain of her cheerleading squad. She does not have a boyfriend and is not exactly looking for one. A lot of guys want to date her, but she doesn’t think high school boys are mature enough for her. She’d rather wait until her collage years to find better more mature guy. Lola does not really get why her best friend does not have a man by now and constantly wonders why that is. She does know that Nessa does not like high school guys. She thinks they are too immature for her taste. She does not even think Nessa had ever been kissed before. Although Lola has had her first kiss the year before when they were in nine grade by a boy in their grade who had been crushing on her for a while.

 

Ricardo Daldon:

Ricardo Dolton: Eighteen-year-old senior, who is looking towards graduation and heading off into collage. He is looking to get a football scholarship into a good I.V league school. His top ten collages are Columbia and U.C Berkeley. He applies to both and gets into Columbia which was his first choice. Unfortunately, his girlfriend at the time is attending another collage, her parents is forcing her to go too. Ricardo feels like his relationship with his current girlfriend will not work out well after high school because they will be going to different collages. He does have a special eye for his sister’s best friend, but because she is not exactly his type, he doesn’t think to take it any further than just a girl he grew up with. He thinks of her as his second little sister because they did grow up playing together. After-all they lived next door to each other and their parents are close friends with each other. Ricardo’s mother is very close to Lola’s mother and their kids played with each other constantly. But when they got into middle school, Ricardo stopped socializing himself too much with his little sister, which also cut Lola off his social radar. He became a young man and started to do more socializing with his fellow male classmates. He later fell into the popular crowd at school.

Ricardo also is a great drummer. He has a band named, The 4 snakes, which consist of his three best friends, Jesse Brown (Lead singer) Andreas Wilson (lead guitarist) Johnny Samuels (backup singer/ keyboardist) Ricardo Dolton (drummer)

 

Supporting Characters

Chris Rivers:


Chris Rivers: Lola’ s older brother who is in his sophomore year in college. He is well established in school and has his own place. He sometimes visits home to spend time with his family. Nessa has a crush on him, but she knows he is way out of her reach and he is too old for her. Even if she knows Chris is older than her, she still tries to be scene with him and tries her hardest to get his attention whenever she knows he is at home.

 

Aria Hamilton:


Aria Hamilton: Ricardo’s girlfriend of two years. They have been together since the beginning of their junior year in high school. She wants to become a professional journalist and wants to attend Texas A & M. She fears she will be too far away from Ricardo, who will be schooling in New York. Her initial plans was to attend Columbia or New York university, but she got turned down from both collages. She had to settle with A & M University. Because of their long-distance situation, they decide to call it quits and go their separate ways. Lola takes this time to try and make something happen with Ricardo.

 

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