Just Pain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

The pain inside me will no longer linger there

They will burn into ashes
They will be taken by the wind
They will no longer be seen then

This pain will no longer linger in my heart
It will be shot out with this gun

You will no longer see the light of day

See you soon in hell
Where you belong

No more days
No more nights

Just pain,
Just pain,
That's all I'll give to you



Submitted: June 19, 2014

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Nice and simple. But I was wondering did he shoot his pain or her?

Fri, June 20th, 2014 11:03am


samnash,in the part that talks about the gun, he shot himself and her. He won't have any pain in him because he will be dead. He will take her with him as revenge for what she done to him. He says that he'll see her in hell for the sins they committed. It kind of explains that they both will be in hell. So technically, they are both dead. If you're still confused, don't hesitate to message me.

Sun, July 13th, 2014 12:59pm

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