Please tell me
Poem by: Baby Precious
What have you done to my mind?
Every night I am filled with desire,
I want you to touch me the way you did before,
My goddess within is on fire.
A broken woman who thought she could never love again,
Has fallen for you and her love has no end.
That’s how I feel but how about you,
Can you say you’ve fallen for me too?
At first it was lust that fanned the flame,
But now it’s love and this love can’t be tamed.
My heart aches when you’re not here,
My mind was foggy but now it’s crystal clear.
I know what I want and that is you,
Please tell me you feel the same too.
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My God Baby! That was beautiful. Reading it all the Booksie men are going to be wishing they were that lucky. Such a sweet out-poring of emotion. If he hadn't before I am sure he has fallen head over heels for you now. Lucky sod.
XoxoX Ron
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It's for a special someone and I hope he does feel the same.
xx
Of course he feels the same if he knows what is good for him! This was so sweet and filled with passion. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
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Thank you for reading and commenting. You're welcome Amy and I do hope he feels the same.
xx
What a sweet pouring of feelings and emotion stated here, just wonderful. Surely you will get a response in kind from him....
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm not usually the soppy lovey-dovey type but I had to get my feelings out there.
Wow what a romantic poem. I hope he does feel the same about her; please tell me he does. Another great poem hun.
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Thank you hun, I hope he does too.
Fab Poem based on reality.Alas!!! Though i don't think men actually "fall in love".Only the female psychy in my opinion is developed enough emotionally to make the transit from lust to love.Men adore and respect a good woman and that is that as far as I can work out anyway.
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