In Darkness and Light
Poem by: Awoken
I am the darkness that will consume your light my beautiful Human
The dark monster lives inside him,
The beast cares not for consequence
For having the thing he desires most,
Me;
I'm in his clutches,
He intends to feast upon me,
The light in his darkness;
My body betrays me,
My arousal thick with desire,
Lust smothering me with its heat
Between my legs;
His fingers, his tongue,
His fire hard and unforgiving;
I'm sinking into the darkness,
My light just a flicker;
My fight is gone,
My fight is over,
The darkness in my light;
Yet my creature, my beast
He kneels before me,
Our eyes meet,
Our heat overwhelms;
Darkness fades, light returns
Tongues collide, our bodies burn;
I am the light that will consume your darkness my beautiful Dragon
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Mmmmm that's definitely how I like to burn! Love this creative twist and a poem from you! Your light, like your words blaze across my senses!
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Goodness, thanks Amy! This developed while writing another story, it could even tie into that, but I'm getting ahead of myself. Glad you enjoyed:)
Wow Awoken that was gooD!
I love those first and last lines..
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Thanks, C. I appreciate your feedback. I always get nervous posting a poem- so not my forte- but I'll only get better the more I try. I'm really glad you liked it and took the time to check it out:)
And I may be the Dragon to lick up your light, my lovely Princess!
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Oh silly man, you can't be my Dragon, you're my merman:) Thanks for reading and commenting:)
It reminds me of Beauty and the Beast! Should it? Maybe a little more explicit than Disney had in mind! It's a fantastic spin, though, alluring and enticing. We all need to give ourselves to a beast, then melt his heart! I love how this turns inside out. A soft touch and a whisper can be so powerful! Great read, girl...most ingenious!
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It wasn't intentional, but I can see how it reminds you of Beauty and the Beast. Not a bad story, but Sleeping Beauty was always my favorite. Your words touch me, GG. Thank you very much. I look forward to your comments, such a ego booster. I really tried on this one, so thanks again:)
Loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it, there is always darkness in light and light in darkness, too much of either and you may be consumed by either, the balance is a teetering tower and no one knows which side will fall first :) this was great lady of the light, any beast would be happy to be consumed by you :) oh and loved it :)
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I agree, we need a balance of the two. If done right, though, no one falls and the burst of... Well, you get it:) Thank you thank you thank you a million times, H. Smiling ear to ear from this comment:))
Simply beautiful, almost romantic - being seduced and then taming the beast with your light. I love performing in the light; I like to see what it does to you. Loved this poem, very cool.
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A seduction executed in the light will bring many pleasures to the Beast in hiding. I can tell you I'd be red all over from blushing, but I'm sure you wouldn't mind:) Thanks for reading and commenting, sir:)
What a lovely way to burn! This was a beautiful poem Awoken. Thank you so much for sharing this with us...Just beautiful writing!!
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You're so sweet, Love! Thank you for taking the time to read my little poem. I'm glad you thought it was beautiful. Thanks:)
Thank you sweet Awoken! Waken unto me... With your poems & stories, you honor us you see? Passion, you've awoken... Body, spirit too, feelings you've invoken, can't help thoughts of you!
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Beautiful comment, Spy, thanks so much!! Glad you've been awoken:)
I loved every word of this. That has to be the best poem you have ever written, very erotic and arousing. As I read it this morning not out of bed yet you raised the sleeping beast. Your words were like fuel for a fire raising his desire. Men of BooksieSilk beware, Stephanie has AWOKEN.
XoxoX Ron
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Wow, thanks Ronnie boy:) I don't think your beast sleeps all that much, haha!! Thanks for reading and commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed this little piece.
Wow that was definitely a cool and enticing poem. I loved every minute of it.
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Thanks, sweetheart! I really appreciate it. Glad you loved it:)
Stephanie has spoken, world she has awoken!!! Me she has as token... Pleasures all revoken! Glory is unspoken... Watch out world... Provokin'!!
This mermaid AWOKEN!!
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You are too kind, Spy. Thank you:)
This is beautiful work here girl. I don't know what else to say ...well done silk sister you speak for your sisters the words we can't find while being consumed and taming our own beasts.thank you for sharing your words
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Anytime, sis. It's definitely harder to tame the beast especially if that beast doesn't want to be tamed. Thanks for reading and commenting. Always a pleasure.
Amy F. Turner