My skin heats up
The flames burning deep
My body's slick
Glistening from the sweat coating my burning skin
The temperature is perfect
The night air is just right
My body molds to you
As if you're forging me out of steel
The hammer swings down
You thrust in deeper each time
With the resounding metallic bangs
My screams ring throughout
Over and over you slam
Like hammer to steel
My screams are loud
My throat is dry
More with your hammer
Yes, bend me to your will
Take it all from me
Only it belongs to you
Take my flower, my sweet pollen, my body
And mold me, bend me, forge me
For I am your Steel
And you are my Blacksmith
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I love the way you worded this. It reminds me of an old song with the lyrics, "Bend me, shape me, anyway you want me, as long as you love me it's alright."
XoxoX Ron
This piece perfectly expresses your need for and love for your partner . All relationships should burn that Hot !!. You express that love so well Ms Awoken , gives me goose bumps !!! He is a lucky guy to have a lady who is so devoted and desirable.
Hot Stuff Ms A....Eadigoo.
I am loving the poem Awoken. You are just popping them out like it nothing! I am so loving the heat that is coming off of this poem.
"The hammer swings down you thrust in deeper each time"- that just sends fire's blazing...I loved reading that part. This whole poem was just a GREAT read Awoken!!
Wooo this girl is on fire!!! Awesome read girl ...awesome.
Fabulously original and easy to read.I just loved reading this.Looks like Blacksmiths still reign in some bedrooms.
MMMMMM....how sultry! The whole poem is a metaphor and it's fantastic, girl! Fabulous analogy...love the molten imagery, the smoldering seduction! What every man should be to a woman!
I love the metaphors through out this poem. Great work.
The honor is all mine. It is rare to find talent as great as yours.
I really loved your analogy! You set the readers mind to whirl in the mental images you produce!
Storywriterx