allie its time to go,I heard my mother calling me but am not done with packing,I just ordered some extremely short skirt and cleavage showing top and am not done packing it..2 hours later am at the airport where I will be meeting my pastor's son Daniel and we will start our journey to Texas to write our exam the exam is in two weeks time but our parents wants us to go before then so that we will study but I know that reading is the last Thing we are going to do..I was still lost in my thought when I heard the voice I had been waiting to hear since I was twelve 'weird right? Yea!av not heard him speak before and his simple hello got my nipples begging to be sucked ,av not had sex before am still a Dick virgin,yea Dick virgin cod that is the only thing av not got stucked to my hole av been masturbating since I was fourteen but nothing like Dick has ever entered my pussy ....I greeted Daniel and we did the formal introductin but I caught him starring at my two goodies,yea my goodies..am a 38dd cup..that's a lot of boobs,right? And my two goodies are always hidden behind my baggy clothes but today I decided to wear a fitted gown nothing unusual just somthing that will bring out my shape...we got rid of the awkwardness before our Parents could notice any thing and now we are in the plane where my first seduction is going to begin...
Submitted: August 07, 2017
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Improve on your writing skills. This is all I will read for it 'cause for me it was horrible. You're too speedy that's what ruined it. I will not read the second one sorry.
Wed, August 16th, 2017 10:08am
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I stated it in my profile that am new to this and this is my first time writting something in the public view...so if u at used to this u can as well enlighten me ...it hurts a lot wen som1 says wat u are trying to do ur best on is horrible..
Wed, August 16th, 2017 1:19pm
The other person who commented here is being very cruel! Yes, you could improve your English, & that would help your work, but the premise DOES come across, & the reader gets a feel for your message... I think that is the most important thing! "If you can't say something nice..." Come on guys!
Fri, August 18th, 2017 3:42pm
A reply to auther If someone doesn't say it you'll never know what you're doing wrong, or how to improve later.
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Wed, August 9th, 2017 12:20pmPlease I kid advice,should I continue this as a short story or I should make it a novel...