super happy fun love go luck story

super happy fun love go luck story super happy fun love go luck story

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Status: Finished

Genre: Other

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a short story on exsistance and human emotion

Summary

a short story on exsistance and human emotion

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Submitted: November 01, 2011

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Submitted: November 01, 2011

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black. First there was black. its inky wetness enveloped everything. slowly sinking, it tasted of gas. My skin had burned away a millena ago. my decent is eternal. black.my memorie has faded. i dont remember befor. the eternal solitude that brought true pain was only surpresed bye letting it all go and accepting my limbo.Burning tar balls crept up my exposed flesh, the pain long ago forgotten. eletrical impulses barley registering there exsistance.my opened skull cavity shows the few eletrical impulses still firing. All the basic nessities i remembered from life. breath, heart beat, but yet they where unessisary eternity, black eternity, eternity, black eternity.my brain flashed with a dim light. somthing that not happend for a thousand years. with the touch came the rush of memorie.my feet felt botten, grantie. my brain flared with light, as i stepped forward. memorie of the simple motor function flashed back. but the step was cut short. my foot touhed a slightly raised object. it felt like the granite botten, smooth. i bent down to fel the object with my hands. another raised object. sliding my hand up yet another raised object. my brain flashed with realization. the light confirming my suspicision. a staircase. dimfaded blue.

On all fours and in the dark i atempt to ascend. a body not ued for a thousand years with every progress my brain rewarded me with light. the brain impulses dimly revieled my path. my muscles and bones creeked under the motions they had long forgotten. after what felt like a million steps i noticed there was a edge to my staircase, somthing i had not noticed befor.but what surprised me more was that i could visualymake out my staircase. the inky black wa giving way to a lighter shade. the inky feeling felt more like cold water it tasted of salt. slime. green.

a million more steps passed bye. the darknesshad receded even more. a algie had formed and grown over my right arm the slime barley visible in the low light. a million more steps . the slime more viible now.it had divserified into two types. a green and a lighter green. my brain pulsed with excitement. lighting the staircase. amazment. the light grew stronger. nearly invisible in the dark passed a tansparent. a jelly fish with long flowing drag-tenticals. my body creaked as i reached up to feel my companion in exsistace. touch, somthing we crave and need. but befor my aged body could reach the jellyfish in time it glided off into the infinite void. dispair another emotion coarsed through my head. hand, hand, foot and foot i made my way forward up he staircase. i had been joined bye a school of fish, they where following the dim sparks of light that came from my head. they playfully swam through my empty eye socket and out my caved in skull. happily circling my head. playful, chase, turn, loop, hide. simple joy of exsistance. feeding on the algie that grew from me. play gave into hightened concern. they made there way into the deepest recesses of my body to hide them selves. a stragler made its way up my body looking for a hiding stop but being rejected. despreation kicked in. trying to force it self into a non vacant spot the stragler was bitten and forced to move on. panic now as it swam for my ribcage. but all was for nothing in the blink of a eye a baricuda swallowed the stragler. a small patch of blood suspened in the water was all that remained. life feed on life. red.

pain of death. my light dimmed. anger coarsed through my viens. a release was needed i looked up and mustered as much as a scream as i could. a few bubbles escaped. i followed the bullbes with my one eye. light blue. change. crawl became bi-petal walk. passing bye me was a fish that generated its on light. blue scales lite bye neon blue dots.a familure feeling came from this being, one i had known befor. but it would not stay long and it was gone. pink. remember.

black was all but a billion steps ago. now was light blue and shades of light. the surface warmth could be felt. clean water was the taste. i could see for atleast 10 steps in every direction. and below was a sandy botten where basic eco systems had taken root.

yellow. from the yellow came energie. the sun wa the dominate light now not me. and the surface was visible. joy. my brain shown with great intensity, but a few hundred more steps. my pace quickened. my hand out streached. a dolphoine observed me. the feeling came over me...i know you.

first my arm surfaced. then my head and leg. i wa standing out of the water. i turned to see where i had came from. ocean in every dicrection calm waters of infinate. i turned to my path a tropical island. the staires follow on a never diverting from there path into the sun.

the feeling came up and over me. i looked to see standing on the stairs was a bird. it cocked its head and looked at me. it was buitiful. reds blues yellows greens all in elbaorate patterns. then came self realization. i held my hand up, its charde flesh and exposed bone. my body had indured the same. the bird in its buitful contrast. i stood with half a skull, one eye charred flesh bones broken. i was dead. the bird took off into the trees,

and from my rebirth from the ocean i know my next task. somthing i remembered from exsistance. a breath, my first breath. with every breath skin retuened, bones healed. regenerations. with the power of life i walked to my destination up the stairs into the sun. a layer of light clowdes covered the sky. my true desitnation was close. i ran. i ran. i ran. the jungle gave way to ever green forest. evergeen to tundra. tundra to ice. the stairs uneffected by the surrouding enviroment. it was cold it tasted of fresh air. the cloudes had intensified to a dense layer. gray for as far as the eye could see.more steps, even more steps. gray. a storm had kciked up. i wa crawling on all four again i would not loose the path. the find fury wa gaining. i dug intothe granite as best i could. my finger nails in pain as i presed them into the stair case. i would not loose my way. keeping my body low i claweed hand over hand. i moved on. a wolf stood over me. seemingly uneffected bye the storm. not a hair moved on it. but ice shards tore away at my skin. we met eyes and the feeling came over me again. what are you i yelled?!. and it scampered off up the stairs fadding into the storm. the ice storm was striping the flesh rom my bone. i pressed on.

my hand emergered, then another, and then my head. i was serenity. a white pufft layer of cloud was the land. a contrast from the storm. the end. i saw a building carved from marble and gold not 20 steps from me. the air was cal. in the sun was the same distance away but its warmth was perfection. looking down there was no storm just ocaional floating cloud and the placid ocean far befor. i walked into the building a small single room of white and gold. in the center o the room was a table with a shallow yet buitiful cup that matched the room. a small bowl of fruit was the center piece, two chairs where on either side of the table.

i sat down at the table and reached for apple. when i noticed my skin had healed from the ice storm. the bight from apple sent a increadible sence through my body. the sweet the texture....it was bliss. i leaned back on the chair cloosing my eyes. the air was pure.

my heart almost skipped a beat when the feeling rushed through me. standing in the door way. the light raditating from her. her skin was unblemmished in anyway. shoulder lengh golden blonde hair. her wings were of whtie, as unblemished as her skin. the angel.

with a simle that could of calmed a mob she held out her hand. i went to her. i fell befor the magnificent buity. looking up a her a single tear ran down my face. "arise" her voice smothly and lyricaly entered m ears. i felt trust. i stood. she placed her hand on my hip and used the other to whipe away the tear. "you have traveled far"

running her hand down my chest i felt excitement. my heart beat with more intenity. she looked me in the eyes a thousand words said in a glance. she leaned in for a kiss.

her lightly moisioned lips touched mine. she ran her hand down and held my crotch. i was already hard.

she withdrew the kiss and looked me in the eyes. i walked her over to the bed. her body and wings spread out. i kissed her lips, then her cheak...neck. i lightly placed my hand on her breast. then i kissed it too. with one hand i slid it in. insider her i felt white, saw white, head white, smelled white. the rush of bliss. the intire knowlede of the univserse came with it. everyone. who they are and where they are going. them came the faces. the trial befor god the angels. what would be down to me for the murders. the man my wife cheated on. my son.

snapping out of the trance i looked down. it was my wife. bearing the gun shot wound in her head. in the door way was the man who cheatedwith my wife on me. still burnt from when he was set ablaze. in the other door way was my son. the knife wound. the innocent face.

i remembered the trail befor god. the punishment to live to cycle of life eternaly.

i ran to the balconey and junmped to the ocean waiting below.

back to black.


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