Bathroom Eel Needs a Vag to Fill
Poem by: Amy F. Turner
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Bathroom Eel Needs a Vag to Fill
Bathroom eel needs a vag to fill
and take at his will
on this journey
to conjure honey;
where he might linger
watching her fingers
play in Happy’s Flappy garage.
Oh! It would make him large
and a grand thigh master,
the elite clam cracker,
for any tight cock pocket
to shove in his rocket;
and blast off Miss Muffet
and explode her tuffet.
So still not done
there’s another one;
mighty weapon of ass destruction
seeks her dark rose for consumption
where cum might sponge
with every jarring lunge.
More sweet cries of abandon
until she swallows his cannon
and sucks down every ball
when she bucks the call
“You’re the best, doll!”
Submitted: July 10, 2020
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Very vivid and hot poem you gave written.
Fri, July 10th, 2020 7:30pm
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Thanks, my friend, for reading and having an opinion to share. ;)
Fri, July 10th, 2020 1:29pm
You sure know how to tempt a rocket to try to climb out of a pocket!!!
Fri, July 10th, 2020 11:30pm
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Absolutely because in the end all want to do is be free to play. Thanks for reading my poem and offering your feelings about it. :)
Sat, July 11th, 2020 2:08pm
Mr Happy,
loves to enter garages through doors that are flappy.
To slide inside,
when its doors open wide.
Hearing the owner moan,
when she feels his big bone.
He's a dirty dog,
when he uses that log.
To fill the parking spot, with cream that is hot.
Feeling her wet heat, on his swollen meat.
It's a feeling of joy, on her desired toy.
The place he likes to reside, once he gets inside.
Getting his oil changed, when she cries out his name.
Loved this one Flo
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Love the response naughty old man. Thank you for reading and sharing your talent that invites smiles and swoons. ;)
Sun, July 12th, 2020 8:53pm
Well, I was just wondering if that eel was gonna be 'electric'!! But that might be 'shocking' for bathroom play. I guess there's nothing like a live one, as slimy as they get, poking in and out of those ocean crevices. (Love your picture book approach)
I think you got a lot of eels' attention here! Cute and Sexy, Amy!
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No electrical shocks sought. Only the kind that love exploring tight wet spaces. Yeah. That would be the best deep sea diving for me.
Tue, July 14th, 2020 7:48pm
Sexy poem with fun and vivid phrases. Happy's Flappy garage, dark rose...
Woof.
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LOL, I am all about the visual and vivid alike. However, not always so in a poem but sometimes it works well. Thanks for reading and commenting, M. :)
Sun, August 16th, 2020 3:16pm
never a dull moment in this hot little rage sequence.
hard to keep my fingers from wandering here.
Amy if there is a hereafter then you I Think will be a sex toy.
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LOL! Wow! I would have never thought of such a possibility. It is intriguing though. My afterlife as a sex toy. Hmmm. Now that has some possibilities. Thanks for the comment and for reading. :D
Sat, September 5th, 2020 4:24am
My jaw dropped at how you make things rhyme while still making it coherent and sexy.. that's something I simply cannot do!
Fri, September 4th, 2020 12:59pm
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Hello, L. I always thought the same thing for years and do not in the least consider myself a poet. I know nothing about meter and rhyme and all the technical mumbo jumbo of the craft. I simply write what I feel or what amuses. If it rhymes great, but if not, that's fine too. Believe me, if I can do this, anyone can. However, thanks for thinking this poem sexy and sharing your thoughts. ;)
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Happy Flappy's garage.....that gives me images of sugar plums and honey!
Fri, July 10th, 2020 2:46pmAuthor
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I hope so because every girl wants to keep her favorite Happy pulled in for servicing when she pleases. :)
Fri, July 10th, 2020 1:32pm