Stuck

Poem by: Amethyst Cummings

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A poem about two lovers who, no matter where they go, will always be together.

You push my legs apart,
And I feel a shiver run down my spine.
I ache your touch,
But I know this is wrong.
We aren’t meant to be together.
Together? No, we aren’t together.
Whatever the fuck we are.
But we’re stuck in this moment,
Which feels like eternity,
Our small piece of forever.
Because no matter where I go,
No matter who you’re with
(God knows you’re with a lot of girls),
We’ll still be together.
Since I’ll never be done with you,
Because you’ll never be done with me.

Submitted: April 23, 2017

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Storywriterx

I loved the way you worded this. True lovers are never apart even if there is physical distance between them.
XoxoX SWx

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 6:35am

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Thanks, Ron! I don't know what drove me to write this poem, since I normally don't like writing poetry cause I'm kinda bad at it. I think it's one of the stories I had read, and I think this worked out in the end!
Amie xoxo

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 3:56pm

benawriter

I think this relates to the fact that sometimes in life there are some really special "moments" and events that seemingly change your life. Without defining why they are together, this nailed it.

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 12:46pm

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I agree, and I also think that this poem shows how relationships are kind of a rollercoaster. I'm not really a romantic, but I think this states the meant-to-be theory, doesn't it?
Amie xoxo

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 4:05pm

Amy F. Turner

Stuck in such a strange place is ironically where many of us stand until we make a break and finally get unstuck to the circumstances we've built for ourselves. Thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing, A. :)

Mon, April 24th, 2017 12:41am

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Thanks for reading, Amy! I might do a conclusion poem so we find out what happened to their relationship, as these kind of affairs can end in so many different ways.
Amie xoxo

Tue, April 25th, 2017 6:11pm

puellalove

I can say "wow, what a love!!"

Mon, April 24th, 2017 4:39pm

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I'm so happy you enjoyed this poem! Thanks for reading!
Amie xoxo

Tue, April 25th, 2017 6:15pm

Moonglow

Brings back old memories, but I'm married now, to someone else I love very much. But you can't help what you dream.! Very touching! Great job!

Thu, June 22nd, 2017 3:41am

Spyguy

I liked this one too!