To Sleep Under Autumn Moon

This was beautiful! Congratulations on a job well done!

Amazing... I just couldn't take my eyes off of it till the end, when they begged for more :)

Sheer elegance. So very beautiful. Loved it.
Susan

That was one of the most amazing things I have ever read! Every detail you gave was so adult that I swear you've grown 10 years and wrote this! Amazing, just simply amazing, if you don't win I don't know who will! It's lovely, beautiful, I could see it all happening before me, I can see the lake with the gentle moon touching it, it felt so real! It felt so touching and I loved it with all my heart! The passion that is stored in there, the deep passion and love that I can imagine! You've done it again!

Mhm, I've read it - I THOUGHT I commented it, but was apparently wrong...

Some times your writing makes me think you might like girls. Or you might like girls who like girls.

I don't know why I think that, maybe I'm just like... using my 3rd eye...? LOL!

I loved it, it was awesome - as are all of your writingsss.

WOW!! I wasn't expecting it to be two girls LOL But it was altogether good. Wonderful imagery, and details and emotions. Nice job!!!

.:XxJessxX:.

*mouth drops*

BEAUTIFUL

Wow you are MY Amber lol U really know how to get a girl arroused!

omg that was a really really awesome storie XD the details were really beautiful and.. and... AWESOME XD

All I can say is wow. This is amazing. So well written. Gave you a 'Like' for it, but seriously I think we should be able to rate higher than that.

Hmm, I don't know about this. It was good writing; plenty of good imagery, descriptive phrases, and a nice flow. But, the story kind of, didn't attract me much. It just didn't seem that interesting. That's just me, but really, this was a great piece to read. It deserves all these comments.

Oops, posted my other comment in the wrong place! o_o
But uh..you know I'm taking the challenge now? Maybe you can comment on mine. xD

Your story was quite interesting...you're very good at description and conveying mood. However, I think you use too many adjectives. Simple is better sometimes! Also, I liked the girlxgirl, it was refreshing~ :D

Absolutely magnificent! As far as just your writing goes, I think this is your best piece yet, it is full of that sensuality and grace that I've heard you exhibit with your lovers. It is a bit lacking in a clear, overwhelming message, but the beauty of it, the simplicity, one of the best works I have read in a very long time. Very well done, kitten.

Once again, simpily amazing!!! Good job.

That was truly beautiful.
Such emotion and beauty.
Superb writing.

Greatly interesting. Deffinitely eye catching. But...well written to my own great surprise. I didn't find any faults in your writing. All I have to say is that it was romantic. Something you do very well. Thank you for participating in my challenge. Hope you enjoyed it.

:D
I loved this! Your story was so detailed, it had my heart racing:)
Can't wait to read another of your stories:)

Though I am incredibly sorry to be the one to to this, someone has to.
A novel you are reading on Booksie titled 'Angela's Awakening' by a Booksier named 'mommy3' is plagiarized work. She has stolen this novel and passed it off as her own writing, I cannot approve of such wrong doing and I ask you not to read any of her writing, the story in question will be removed from Booksie, but is this enough?
Not reading her writing might make her understand that what she has done and continues to do is wrong.
I leave this in your hands.

Here is the proof of my accusation, if you wish to see for yourself if I am telling the truth or if you would like to continue to read the real novel

http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/b73221/Merediths-Awakening-/Violet-Summers/?si=0

Ow sweetheart, you clearly are naive. 'mommy3' did copy 'Angela's Awakening' word-for-word with the exception of the names, which she changed. Though if you had read the story, witch you did not, you would know that most of the time she didn't even remeber to change them.
So now Violet Summers, the person actually responsibility for the brilliant writing, isn't getting the respect or the money from her book.

Plagiarism is ILLEGAL and Booksie WILL NOT stand for it on there reputable sight.

Fyi, get your facts straight.

"All Art is either plagiarism or revolution" A famous quote by Paul Gauguin which was not intended to condone plagiarism, it was for the exact opposite reason. He believed that Artist were redefining the structure of ancient art with new ideas based on past history, not making exact replicas of other peoples work.


Also, I am not here to be liked, I'm here to stop people from wrong-doings that reflect on Booksie.
Booksie could be sued for having plagiarized work on their sight. I make sure that doesn't happen.

Deleted this comment or don't it really doesn't matter. Booksie has removed the offending work from the sight and if 'mommy3' continues to post plagiarized work her account will be deleted.