Best Frenemies

Best Frenemies Best Frenemies

Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica


Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica


Elise and Veronica are best friends, and also, arch rivals. Friendly competition goes to another level when these two fight for the attention of one man during a fun night out.


Elise and Veronica are best friends, and also, arch rivals. Friendly competition goes to another level when these two fight for the attention of one man during a fun night out.


Submitted: August 18, 2012

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Submitted: August 18, 2012



I tilted my head back as my newest lover kissed me along my neck. Alex Lopez was a professional boxer with deep brown eyes, butter-pecan colored skin, and dark, wavy hair. We both knew what we wanted from each other: hot, raw, no strings attached sex. Tonight, I had invited him to my place for a little late night fun.

I straddled his lap and massaged my wet pussy against his half-erect cock. He lifted my dress so my ass was exposed and squeezed the soft flesh. I shuddered with pleasure, anticipating what was to come.

I raised myself onto my knees and pressed my breasts into his face before I heard the doorbell ring.

I froze, and then went back to pressing myself against Alex. I figured whoever was at the door would eventually go away.

Alex’s hands held me still and he looked up with a confused expression on his face, “Aren’t you going to answer the door?”

I waved my hand in the air and rolled my eyes, saying flippantly, “It’s nothing. Now, where were we?”

Alex trailed kisses along the valley of my breasts, using his tongue to lick the sensitive area. I swung my hair to the side and sighed, holding his head to my chest.

The doorbell rang two more times. Then the person began knocking on the door like they were trying to break it down.

Alex chuckled softly and lifted me off his lap, “I think you better answer the door, baby.”

I jerked my clothes into place and put my shoes on, annoyed that my night had just been interrupted. I walked towards the door, and when I opened it and saw who it was I wanted to scream.

Fuck! Not her!

Veronica Fuentes stood with her hands on her hips, looking sexy in a tight dress that hugged every curve of her body. She was my best friend, and also, my arch rival. Veronica always felt like she had to compete with me because she was jealous of my looks.

I was a model with a tall, willowy frame, jet black hair, and a delicate face. Veronica was pretty in her own way, but she was noticed more for her body. The girl had double D breasts, a flat stomach, and a large, curvy ass.

The competition between us was mainly over men. If she found out I was interested in someone, she would try and steal them away to prove she was better than me. That was why I wanted to keep her as far away from Alex as possible.

She gave me a big smile and ran her hand through her long, brown hair, “Hey, Elise! Are you ready to go to the party?”

I tried to be friendly, but I couldn’t curb the waspish tone in my voice, “What party?”

Veronica gave me a surprised look and held up her hands in a defensive gesture, “Hey, no need to get an attitude.”

I took a deep breath and let it out slowly, “I’m sorry. Now, what party are you talking about?”

“Brittany’s 24th birthday party! She got us on the guest list at Club Echo downtown.”

I loved Brittany, but I could have honestly cared less about her party right then. I scrambled to find some excuse not to go. I finally settled for the age old classic.

“I’m not feeling well, Veronica,” I hunched down a little, holding my stomach like it hurt, “I think I ate something bad.”

Veronica narrowed her eyes in suspicion. She took in my clothing, my high heels, and said, “You don’t look sick to me.”

“Well, I am! I just want to relax tonight, okay? Let it go.”

Suddenly, Alex was by my side. When he saw Veronica, he looked apologetic and said, “Oh, I didn’t mean to interrupt. You were at the door so long I just wanted to make sure everything was ok.”

Veronica batted her eyelashes and tossed her hair over her shoulder in a boldly flirtatious gesture. Her voice was sugary sweet when she said, “Elise, aren’t you going to introduce me to your friend?”

I said in a barely controlled voice, “Veronica, this is Alex Lopez.”

When Veronica heard his Latin last name, she immediately started speaking Spanish. Alex picked up on the conversation and they began speaking rapidly, leaving me completely in the dark.

I cleared my throat to get their attention, “Veronica, don’t you need to get going?”

Her eyes lit up like she had a brilliant idea and my heart sank. Oh, no. What was she planning now?

“Hey, Alex, Elise and I were supposed to go to a birthday party tonight at Echo. Do you want to come with us?”

“I love that place,” Alex said in an excited tone, “Sure, I’ll go.”

Veronica looked at me with a triumphant grin, and I wanted to choke her.


The club was a lot more fun than I had expected. We had a very private VIP booth and free bottle service. Our friends had left us, so Veronica, Alex, and I were in the booth alone. I pulled Alex up by the hand and started dancing with him while Veronica occupied herself with her cell phone.

The music went from high-energy house to sexy R&B. Alex sat down, but I still felt like dancing. I looked over at Veronica and tugged on her free hand, “I love this song! Let’s dance!”

She got up from her seat and started to dance with me. I was having a great time, until I looked over at Alex and noticed the way the way he was staring at Veronica. His eyes were on her breasts, on her ass that was barely covered by the dress she wore.

When Veronica noticed him admiring her, she gave him a sultry look. She swung her hair to the side and dropped her ass to the floor. She bounced it up and down and few times before she bent over and brought it up slowly.

Alex’s eyes never left the curve of her ass as she did her move. His lustful look made me insanely jealous. Well, Veronica wasn’t the only one that could dance. I moved the front of my dress down until my breasts were practically spilling out, and then pushed the mounds together.

Alex’s eyes were on me now, so I swayed my body sensuously, moving my hands from my breasts to my hair. As I lifted the dark tresses, I swung my hips from side to side.

He looked my body up and down, licking his lips like he couldn’t wait to get a taste of me.

Veronica turned around and moved right up against the front of my body. She moved and caressed her breasts, winking over at Alex as she did it. Afterwards, she bent over, touched her hands to the floor, and started shaking her ass on me.

Her ass was so round, so soft. The way she jiggled it on my pussy made the blood rush straight to my clit. I gasped in pleasure, loving what she was doing. I was not bisexual, but all of a sudden I really wanted to fuck her.

Before I could have stopped myself, I slapped her ass. She jumped in surprise, and started moving even faster. The little slut, she loved it! I yank the back of her dress, silently telling her to come up from the floor.

When she was up, I grabbed a fistful of her hair and roughly yanked the strands. I brought my mouth to her neck and slowly licked her. I felt her body tremble, heard her soft moan of pleasure. I whispered in her ear, “Keep moving your ass for me.”

I pushed her upper body down so she could rest her hands on the coach. I lifted her dress up, and was shocked to see she wore no panties. My arousal kicked into overdrive and I slapped it, making the mounds wiggle. Veronica began to move her ass. She shook it up and down, side to side, around and around. I ground my clit against her, dry humping like I had a dick in my pants.

I could have cum just by staring at the way her ass bounced. The cheeks clapped together, giving me quick peeks of her tight asshole. My thong was soaking wet from my juices. I looked over at Alex, and he had a raging hard-on. He was rubbing it through his pants, his eyes hooded, mouth slightly open.

Funny, I had completely forgotten about him.

I reached for Veronica’s hair and yanked her up again, “You always have to compete with me, you little bitch,” I whisper into her ear, “You want to fuck my man so badly? Go ahead, let’s see if you can handle him like I can.”

I turned her head towards Alex and pushed her in his direction. She fell to the floor, and crawled on her hands and knees towards him like the hungry whore she was.

I went over and pulled the privacy screen down on the booth so no one would see us. When I turned around, I saw Veronica between Alex’s legs, rubbing and licking his erection through his pants. His head was resting on the back of the sofa, his eyes closed.

I walked over to them and got on my knees, placing myself on the other side of Alex’s leg. I pulled up his shirt and started kissing and licking his abs. He moaned deep in his throat and threaded his hand through my hair.

Veronica unzipped Alex, freed him from his boxers and put the head of his cock in her mouth.

“Ah, Fuck,” Alex said in a gruff voice. Veronica began bobbing her head up and down, making slurping noises as she sucked. Alex’s hand tightened in my hair. I moved up his chest and played with his nipples.

I looked down at Veronica, and saw she only had half of him in her mouth. I reached for her hair and pushed her head all the way down, causing her to gag and spit all over herself.

“Take it all the way down, bitch,” I say, incredibly turned on by the sight of her gagging on Alex’s cock, “get used to it.”

Alex’s hand joined mine and we started choking her on his cock. Veronica’s mascara was running, her eyes bloodshot. I reached with my free hand and pulled the top of her dress down, revealing her bare breasts. I pulled and twisted a large brown nipple, eliciting a moan from her.

“Shit, do that again, baby,” said Alex, “that feels so good around my dick.”

Veronica moaned even louder and started rubbing her clit. She looked so sexy like that, with her big tits swinging back and forth, and her hand between her legs. I suddenly wanted a taste of her. I released my hand from her hair and moved to Alex’s ear. I whispered, “I want to fuck her.”

Alex gave me a sexy grin, and let go of Veronica’s hair, “She’s all yours, baby,” he said.

Veronica’s eyes connected with mine and she moved from between Alex’s legs. When she was close, I put my hands on either side of her face and brought my mouth to hers.

Kissing a woman was completely different from kissing a man. Veronica’s mouth was softer, her movements more sensual. We played with each other’s breasts while we kissed. Pretty soon, our hands were rubbing and squeezing each other everywhere.

I pulled away and pushed her down so she was lying on the floor. I ran my hands up her smooth calves and told her, “spread your legs for me.”

Veronica lifted her legs and held the backs of her knees, giving me a full view of her pussy. I groaned at the sight of her. She had such a pretty kitty, completely bare with a piercing on the hood of her clit. Her lips glistened from her juices.

I placed myself between her legs and gave her a long, slow lick.

“Oh!” Veronica’s back arched off the floor. I hooked my arms around her legs, and started working my tongue on her.

I never thought I would like eating pussy, but Veronica’s flavor was so sweet and exotic. I licked her slit from bottom to top then captured her clit, sucking it into my mouth. I released her with a loud pop then began tickling her jewelry with the tip of my tongue.

“Fuck, that feels so good!” She said as put her hands in my hair, holding me down. Her whimpers and pleas urged me on. I covered her whole pussy with my mouth and lapped up her cream, wanting to taste it all.

I suddenly felt Alex lift my hips, urging me onto my knees. I knew what he wanted. I spread my legs, waiting for him to slip inside of me. I moved my mouth from Veronica’s pussy and groaned when I felt him push into me, inch by agonizing inch. He reached the hilt and I shivered.

He pulled almost completely out, and then slammed back into me.

“Fuck yeah!” I screamed. “Pound my fucking pussy!”

He grabbed onto my hips and began fucking my brains out. His hard and furious thrusts made it hard to concentrate on Veronica’s pussy. All I could focus on was the huge length moving in and out of my cunt.

I felt Veronica grab my hand and she said, “Put your fingers in my pussy!”

I pushed four fingers up Veronica’s cunt and started fucking her, mirroring Alex’s pace, “Like this, you dirty slut?! You like that shit?!”

“OH YEAH!” she was riding my fingers, her tits moving up and down with her movements, “FUCK ME!”

I was so turned on I could feel myself dripping around Alex’s cock. He growled and started going harder, almost knocking me to the floor with the power of his thrusts.

I gritted my teeth and began moving my fingers faster, the digits making wet noises as she moaned and writhed on the floor, “Look at you, you dirty little bitch! You love having my fingers slam into your pussy don’t you?!”

“YES!” her eyes were wide, her breath coming out in little pants, “YES, MORE! GIVE ME MORE!”

I moved my fingers and found her g-spot. Veronica squealed. I moved my fingers in and out a few more times before I added my fifth finger.

Veronica grabbed my wrist and started moving my fingers in and out, using it to fuck herself. Alex cursed and began drilling into me at a frenzied pace.

Our collective moans and groans mingled together. My pussy was clenched painfully tight, my eyes rolled into the back of my head.

Veronica moved my wrist a few more times, and then screamed, “IM GONNA FUCKING CUM!” She pulled my fingers out of her cunt and squirted, letting out a howl of pleasure.

Her juices being sprayed all over my body triggered my own orgasm. My body convulsed as I screamed and screamed. I bent my head towards Veronica’s squirting pussy, wanting to drink every drop that came my way.

Alex continued to pound into me. I felt his dick swell with his impending orgasm. It wouldn’t be long before he shot his seed deep into my cunt.

I was shocked when he pulled out of me. I had never known him to stop this close to the edge. He walked around me and picked Veronica up by the hair and pushed her onto the couch. She was so weak she didn’t even protest.

Alex sat down next to her on the couch, grabbed her by the waist, and then slammed her ass down on his cock. She yelled as Alex began jack hammering her ass.

“I’VE BEEN WANTING TO FUCK THIS ASS ALL NIGHT!” his voice was like gravel. I had never seen him this wild. I spread my legs and started to play with my pussy, turned on by Alex’s dominance.

He snatched Veronica’s arms and held them behind her back as he rammed into her ass. All Veronica could do was whimper and gasp.

“KEEP FUCKING MY ASS!” she said in a high-pitched voice, “PLEASE, PLEASE DON’T STOP!”

Veronica’s huge tits were bouncing up and down, practically slapping her in the face. I started fucking myself faster at the sight.

“YEAH BITCH?! YOU WANT ME TO TEAR YOUR FUCKING ASS UP?!” Alex said. He released her arms and reached for her clit. He smacked the bundle of nerves before he started vigorously stroking it.

“YEEEESSSSS!” Veronica’s face was bright red, her eyes squeezed tightly shut, “YESSSS! FUCK MY ASS!” The plea ended on a broken little sob.

I was stoking my pussy, trying to match Alex’s rhythm. I was so close to the edge I had no control over myself. I was waiting for Veronica to cum, I wanted to cum with her.

As Veronica’s orgasm hit, her legs started to quake and her pussy let out a stream of juice. She was hollering, her words running together in an incoherent jumble. I couldn’t hold back anymore and I came along with her.

Alex threw Veronica off of his dick and pushed her to the ground, “OPEN YOUR FUCKING MOUTH! IM GONNA CUM!”

He stroked himself a few times before he dumped his jizz into Veronica’s waiting mouth. Violent shudders wracked his body as he growled through the expulsions.

When it was over Alex collapsed onto the sofa. He was covered in sweat, his breathing heavy from exhaustion.

Veronica turned towards me and opened her mouth. I crawled over to where she was and kissed her, swapping the cum from her. Alex moaned as we played with his nut, exchanging it between our mouths and licking it off one another.

We were we done swallowing; Veronica and I looked at each other and giggled.

“Wow, that was amazing,” said Veronica.

I put my arm around her shoulder, “Yeah, I’d never been with a woman before. You were pretty damn hot, girl.”

Veronica smiled shyly and looked up at me, “Maybe we could do that again sometime, you know, just you and me?”

I smiled back and said, “I think I would like that.”

After that night, we were truly the best of friends.

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