The Singapore Solution

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Sci-Fi and Fantasy Erotica  |  House: Stripping and Humiliation

Court-ordered stripping and humiliation as punishment for kids.
(scenario for some sort of graphic story)
Posted to y!gallery in 2007, with an invitation to provide illustrations


*1*
An auditorium.  Perhaps it looks like a concert hall. People in the seats.  Men in tuxedos, women in evening gowns. They talk quietly among themselves, waiting. Some of them have programs -- on the cover it says “Rocky Chang” and shows the face of a smiling boy.

The front 3 or 4 rows in the auditorium we see are filled by schoolgirls.  They wear plaid jumpers or something equally distinctive.  They talk among themselves, too, but seem more excited than the adults.

*2*
Some explanation appears.  Singapore, in the near future. It seems that public caning was no longer effective in controlling juvenile delinquency.  So a more creative punishment program has been implemented.

*3*
The lights dim.  Talking stops.  The host comes on the stage at the front and says a few words:  ‘Tonight we have the next in our series of juvenile delinquent punishments. Rocky Chang.’

Some polite applause by the adults, more enthusiastic cheer by the schoolgirls.

‘You can read in your programs about the crime, the trial, the verdict, and the sentence.  You don't want me to waste time going over that now.  So... here it is!’

The host leaves the stage.

*4*
Two burly men (perhaps dressed all in black) bring Rocky to center stage.  One holding each arm.  [Rocky's exact age is left to the artist.]

[The punishment here ... details left to what the artist likes to do ...]

In there somewhere is a flashback showing what Rocky did.  Depending on how you want it to seem... it could be something serious: Rocky drops things from a highway overpass until he causes a fatal accident.  Or it could be something trivial: Rocky refuses to turn off his music when asked to by his parents.  So depending on what is shown here, you can adjust how extreme the reaction of society is made to seem.

*5*
Sometimes the adult audience goes ‘Ooh!’ and ‘Aah!’.  The schoolgirls are louder--eventually they are standing up, jumping, screaming.  (As we have seen a rock concerts.) Some have cameras, they are snapping pictures.  [The girls are all the same age as Rocky.  In fact, most of them are his school classmates.]

Behind the three on stage is a giant video screen.  It shows close-ups of what is going on.  Perhaps Rocky's face with tears streaming down.  Or, when some interesting body part is revealed, we see it there: 4 meters tall.  After half an hour, he is completely nude.

*6*
We take a break.  While Rocky lies naked and whimpering on the floor, the host comes back on stage and chooses a slip of paper from a jar.  The lucky person whose ticket number matches gets to come on stage and administer some final indignity to the boy.

Clear in the back of the auditorium we see some schoolboys who look on in horror.  They whisper among themselves that they never, ever, will be disobedient again!

 

 

 


Submitted: January 03, 2021

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nrc

Advice for authors and

I would liked learning what characters are thinking in addition to the narrator.

Thu, February 25th, 2021 1:12pm

Daverse

Great story outline! All kinds of exciting possibilities here, if one were to develop all the humiliating nuances. Why don't you flesh it out?

Thu, March 11th, 2021 4:05am

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