Kidnapped and kept

Kidnapped and kept Kidnapped and kept

Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica

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Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica

Summary

Hi everyone this is my first story so let me know if I should continue or not. Ana was a hardworking girl but when she's kidnapped by Max he shows her that it's ok to depend on someone other then herself. Can Ana escape or will she give her heart to her kidnaper and learn to trust him.

Summary

Hi everyone this is my first story so let me know if I should continue or not. Ana was a hardworking girl but when she's kidnapped by Max he shows her that it's ok to depend on someone other then herself. Can Ana escape or will she give her heart to her kidnaper and learn to trust him.

Chapter1 (v.1) - Kidnapped and kept

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Hi everyone this is my first story so let me know if I should continue or not. Ana was a hardworking girl but when she's kidnapped by Max he shows her that it's ok to depend on someone other then herself. Can Ana escape or will she give her heart to her kidnaper and learn to trust him.

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: March 17, 2014

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Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: March 17, 2014

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late december at 12:00 midnight

"HEY MARK" I had to yell over the loud music in the bar Smity's was known for it's very loud music. I was a waitress i've been working here for about a month now and trust me it wasnt easy dealing with drunk very grabby men who thought it was ok to to slap asses and grab boobs. Unfortunately for them though my dad was a solider and before he past away he taught me a few things about self defense so everynight for the last month I was putting my skills to good use.

"Hey ana it's time for you to start heading home sweetheart" Mark said to me he was now close enough that i couldIt was late hear him. Mark was the owner of the bar and a pretty sweet guy him and his wife owned the bar his wife was the bartender and she was tough but sweet.

"Thank god" I laughed as he handed me my coat and my purse.

"Do you need me to take you home?"

"No i'm good it's not that far I only live a block away" I told him but leveled me with the mean down stare to which i only laughed at him.Any one else would have been scared mark was no small guy he was a big guy atleast six feet tall and i was only five three but to me mark was a teddy bear ..a very over protective teddy bear.

"Im very serious ana it's cold out and it's friday night you know how the creeps are out on friday's ."

"Mark im a big girl and I can take care of myself besides I have my knife and my deadly pepper spray" As much as I tried to hold in my giggles of laughter I failed miserably and started laughing mark of course didnt find it the least bit funny.

"Well fine but atleast call us when you get home you know how we worry and we dont want a repeat of last time do we?"

"No we don't" I roll my eyes at the memory of the "last time" it was cold outside and it was one in the morning and once i got home fell asleep and forgot to call. One hour later my door is being banged open and mark and sarah are yelling for me to answer the door. That night I got the bigest lecture of my life and since then i havent forgotten to call. Mark and sarah knew my dad so when he died they took over the roll of keeping a eye on me. They were like my guardians very over protective guardians.

"Well i'll walk you to the door ok " the look he gave me left no room for argument so i took a deep breath and said ok.

"Ok now don't forget to call us when you get home ok"

"Ok "

As i started walking home I got a tingle in my spine and that only happens when something bad is about to happen to me.I took in my surroundings and slowly turned but there was nothing behind me not even a car so i shook off the feeling and pulled out my knife as discretly as possibleand held it in my hand and started off home alil faster then before. The wind picked up and I got the hit with a sweet smelling cologne. I slide open my knife and turn to face my follower but there was no one behind me but before i could even begin to turn around again the wind was knocked out of me and i ended up on the snow covered ground but when my captor decided to flip me over i took my chance and sliced his arm."Fuck what the hell!"

"Let me go asshole or ill cut off your balls and make you my bitch"

"Ok you wana do the hard way then fine by me i was going to be nice but your going to be punished for cuting me"

Before i could say anything else he grabed my hand and pressed down on a pressure point and i had te relase the knife but with my free hand i punched the side of his face pretty good.As i saw him spit into the snow i realised that i busted his lip.

"Ok no more mister nice guy sweetie its time to take a nap" He reached out and pulled out a nasty smelling rag but before he put the rag over my mouth i took a deep breath and held it and started to fight him off again.

"Come on sweetie just take a deep breath just breath for me "

But all i did was scratch ,kick,punch but i could only hold my breath for so long and then all i saw was blackness and the last thing i heard was the harsh breathing of my captor.


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