Featured Review on this writing by Writing_wall44
"Fucking hell, woman! So intense, I don't even know what to say."
Comments: 10
Submitted: September 07, 2020
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Tue, September 8th, 2020 1:57amI think the horny-69 virus has invaded your body. It's not deadly but it can make your body sweat and the top of your thighs get quite wet from your internal juices leaking out.
Tue, September 8th, 2020 9:03amfabulous presentation Meg however YOU can do better than this.
It's too much full on porno in my opinion.
I Think a rewrite is on the cards here.
It seems "rushed " to me.
I DO understand the reasons for it though if I am right.
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It is condensed and way over the top...and just gets worse, to be honest.
I'm well into the second chapter and, much like a Stephen King epic, the thing is typing itself. I'm just stepping back from my computer in horror.
By the way, what is up with not being able to load pics on your title page? When did that happen? I'm looking back at stuff published during the weekend - no pictures on anything. I get it. This is a writing site. But, I still like the cover of books which almost always have some sort of relevant drawing or photo.
my computer fucked up Meg.
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This seems to be just the beginning for Meg. Could see some of Charlie's biker friends stopping by for some fun. Hot, erotic, well written.
Wed, September 9th, 2020 5:16pmBloody hell Meg! You say thing are going to get rougher? I dread to think what that's going to be, lol. :)
Thu, September 10th, 2020 12:19amEducational and slightly alarming, certainly harsher and edgier than the other stuff of yours I've read. Looking forward to next chapter and 'Rolling Stone tongue on your mound' is the most memorable line I've read in ages.
Thu, September 10th, 2020 8:57amThis felt like a fever dream, I like it
Sat, October 3rd, 2020 2:03pmI never thought that reading about such torture could be so hot.....You're downright scary.
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Lisa ☺
Oh my God what a bitch Ashley is, what is Charlie's problem why is he doing what Ashley said and letting her do what she wants. I hope meg gets that lock off and gets Ashley arrested for it. But great story cant wait to read more, it's a interesting story I want to see how things pan out.
Mon, September 7th, 2020 8:38pmAuthor
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Thanks for reading this, Lisa. Things are getting ready to turn upside down. It's going to get much rougher.
Mon, September 7th, 2020 3:40pm