The offer

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

And he found her rules
a painful pleasure,
he delighted in them
as in the sweet nectar
moistening her body,
the one he craved
and dreamt to taste.
He submitted gladly,
safe in her strength,
delirious in his lust 
while strongly bound,
feeling powerless
and yet oh so willing
to be used by her,
the One who knew
just what he needed,
the One to whom
he offered his body,
his pent-up desire,
his unfailing consent
bathed with his sweat,
his cum and his tears.

Submitted: March 02, 2023

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Daisy xx

Oh, Lizzie - any man or woman would succumb to the erotic, orgasmic delights of your sumptuous poetry! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Mon, March 6th, 2023 7:17pm


Dearest Harriet, thank you so much!!! Love, Lizzie.

Mon, March 6th, 2023 11:45am


I think that pretty much sums up how several of us feel after reading this wonderful piece of erotica. Beautiful.

Tue, March 7th, 2023 11:41pm


Thank you so much for your words! Love, Lizzie.

Tue, March 7th, 2023 4:48pm


Really hot and gorgeous. Makes me want to go tie somebody up and ride all night long.

Mon, March 27th, 2023 2:36am


Hmmm...what a marvellous fantasy!
Love, Lizzie.

Mon, March 27th, 2023 10:12am

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