The offer

Poem by: Lizziewolf

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And he found her rules

a painful pleasure,

he delighted in them

as in the sweet nectar

moistening her body,

the one he craved

and dreamt to taste.

He submitted gladly,

safe in her strength,

delirious in his lust

while strongly bound,

feeling powerless

and yet oh so willing

to be used by her,

the One who knew

just what he needed,

the One to whom

he offered his body,

his pent-up desire,

his unfailing consent

bathed with his sweat,

his cum and his tears.

Submitted: March 02, 2023

Poetry dominatrix.slave.submission

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Daisy xx

Oh, Lizzie - any man or woman would succumb to the erotic, orgasmic delights of your sumptuous poetry! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Mon, March 6th, 2023 7:17pm

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Dearest Harriet, thank you so much!!! Love, Lizzie.

Mon, March 6th, 2023 11:45am

willnorman

I think that pretty much sums up how several of us feel after reading this wonderful piece of erotica. Beautiful.

Tue, March 7th, 2023 11:41pm

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Thank you so much for your words! Love, Lizzie.

Tue, March 7th, 2023 4:48pm

DampKitten

Really hot and gorgeous. Makes me want to go tie somebody up and ride all night long.

Mon, March 27th, 2023 2:36am

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Hmmm...what a marvellous fantasy!
Love, Lizzie.

Mon, March 27th, 2023 10:12am

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