So Near And Yet So Far
Damn you
For leaving me here, and
Damn you
For the memories you leave behind
Damn you
For taking my heart
And ripping it all apart
So Near And Yet So Far
I loved you once
Damn you
I still do
When I see and feel you everywhere
What's a girl to do?
Damn you
Why do you still have a hold on me ?
How is that even so?
You're gone from my life but not my love
I look for you still, even when you're
So Near And Yet So Far
Submitted: February 14, 2023
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Tragic loss, and even more so when feelings linger....Understand. Nicely done.
Tue, February 14th, 2023 3:35pm
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Thank you, Will : )
Tue, February 14th, 2023 10:27am
as far as I can tell you can do better then this damn guy.... screw him
Tue, February 14th, 2023 6:18pm
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Well it was meant as a flip-side to your poem, Sam. Not everyone needs gifts to have someone else prove their affections for them. Happy Valentines Day, Sam.
Tue, February 14th, 2023 10:26am
Very strong, could be a song!
You write so fine, your gift you define!
The loser was him, his hope, but a whim;
If only his sign, he could've designed:
Strung self along, making future all wrong!
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You lost me on the last two lines.
Best stick with direct comments from now on.
This is a superb example of your prowess as an author my sweet friend! I hope you had a very happy Valentine's Day!
Wed, February 15th, 2023 11:13am
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Thank you Spy : )
Wed, February 15th, 2023 8:16pm
Love the logistics of your piece and how you put this together.
You capture the essence of breaking up so well. Someone always seems to walk away unscathed while the other is completely dismantled... sort of like how drunk drivers always seem to survive car crashes.
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Right ??? As for break ups ...the next time that happens to me I'm gonna tell everyone he left me for another man hahahahaha : ))
Thank you for reading me DK.
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beastieboy
You have the eyes to see the loss and the passion that inspired that Loss .
Tue, February 14th, 2023 7:27amSometimes the Passion is worth the Loss .
If there is Never a Loss then have you ever really felt the Passion ? E. ????????
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yes, i understand, I still don't wanna feel that loss, though : )
Tue, February 14th, 2023 10:41am.