Back to the Beginning
It is back
The dreaded day
When you
have to pay
your way
into the sack
It is strange
For at night
You think
You’ve seen the light
The next
Your are back
To the beginning
You have already
lost from the start
When you first said
Till death do us part
A sinkhole
Forever black
They call it V-Day
A victory dance
As if you’ve ever
had the chance
to surrender
Or go back
To the beginning
Submitted: February 12, 2023
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Such lovely romance for Valentine's! Thank you Sam x
Mon, February 13th, 2023 12:45pm
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thank you Ellie
Tue, February 14th, 2023 10:13am
If a gift of Valentine is required so she's mine;
Then truly she is not, & out "Love", it is rot!
'Cause simply, LOVE is divine:
Doesn't seek "What is mine..."
When tokens're sought, then love ain't begot!
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I couldn't have said it better
Tue, February 14th, 2023 10:14am
Love must suffer a lot, or else it's all snot---
If prove it you must, then love ain't but lust~?
The Devil's playground, is all you have found!!!
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what is wrong with just lust... it can get the job done without the added baggage...
Tue, February 14th, 2023 10:15am
When you have someone you love, the gift on V day is no different than a birthday or Christmas...just an opportunity to remind her that you do love and maybe even appreciate her.
Fri, February 17th, 2023 1:19pm
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OMG…. So I have to get a gift on v-day, a birthday and on Christmas?!?! 3 GIFTS ….What the hell!!?!?
Sun, February 19th, 2023 10:08am
Technical shit: I love the way you form your stanzas, the unique rhyme pattern, and the way you use repetition. This is really quite advanced, Sam.
Emotional shit: I got your chocolate covered strawberries right here. Sorry, I'm a little late, but I've been wading in shit this week. I hear that bananas go well with strawberries. You got one of those? I'd just love to peel it.
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Well technically it’s shit…emotionally I’m shit…2 strawberries and a banana now that what I call real shit
Sun, February 19th, 2023 10:02am
Let's mix our shit together, Sam
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C'mon Sam it can't be that bad?! I gave up on love and all that mushy stuff. But V-Day itself isn't bad.
Mon, February 13th, 2023 12:43amAuthor
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Oh no.. it is that bad.
Sun, February 12th, 2023 6:50pmSo we agree… love sucks… you gave up on love…so did I… I even came up to the conclusion love does not exist.
Now let’s talk about v-day… it is sadly funny how everyone equates the size of their gift with the side of their love.
If they are or think they are so much in love then why do they need a gift to prove it?!
I think everyone is so insecurely insincere that they need a gift to make sure they are being loved or not