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"Rest room sex IS the new car sex lol!
I loved the way you avoided the awkwardness of RRS Hj.Still naughty too"
'Ellie, if you can push up harder with those skinny arms of yours, and arch your body upwards?'
'Like this you mean?'
'Yeah, like that, Ellie. Want to see that pony of yours draped over the rest room floor. Want the blood to rush to your head, make your face all red.'
'Not sure, I can hold this much longer, Simon.'
'Want you up on tiptoes, Ellie. Now do as I say, and get up on tiptoes.'
'There, I'm right up high on tiptoes for you, Simon, like a good girl.'
'Good girl, Ellie. Now hold it right there while I slide my rigid tarse deep inside you!'
Submitted: February 09, 2023
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Rest room sex IS the new car sex lol!
I loved the way you avoided the awkwardness of RRS Hj.Still naughty too
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I loved the way you abbreviated it! LOL! Thank you, lemonshine! x
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Janus
Well, Ellie, is a good girl. I liked the use of the photo. Very much a flash fiction piece- but a hot micro story. And the use of tarse- what an underused gem of a word. Deserves not to be left in the Middle Ages. And screw modern scrabble for not allowing it. A delightful story.
Fri, February 10th, 2023 12:19amAuthor
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I knew you were a Scrabble player, Janus! I play Scrabble occasionally, too! Thank you for your kind words: short can be very sweet, I find, particularly online where reader attention span is gnat-like, and we all get distracted by the pictures. Have a lovely weekend! Ellie xx aka Harriet-Jacqui Furl xx
Fri, February 10th, 2023 1:53pm