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Daisy xx
Really fantastic writing, much enjoyed. From my experience of online reading - my work included, most readers on Booksie and Silk prefer much shorter chapters. If you reduce your chapters into several smaller parts I think you'll retain / attract more readers and build up the following your excellent, atmospheric writing truly deserves. Best Wishes, HJ Furl aka Ellie xx
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