Only a whiff of her scent
can render him delirious,
only the laughing sound
of her stilettos approaching
can send him into a vortex
of desire mingled with fear,
only the touch of her hand
on the nerves of his body
can make him lose control
and climax immediately.
but he won´t allow this,
knows her unbending rules,
he has learnt to hold it
till his mistress signals
with just a piercing glance
that he has her permission.
Submitted: January 27, 2023
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You nailed, it, Lizzie, just the way it is.....I love your kinky side!
Sat, January 28th, 2023 8:02pm
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Wow, thank you! Love, Lizzie.
Sat, January 28th, 2023 12:17pm
OMG.. I want that permission…. I almost …. Reading you poem…. Can I?! Pleeeease… can I ?!?!! How the heck do you do that?! With just words…
Sun, January 29th, 2023 10:50am
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Ah it must be an ancient secret art,haha!
Thanks for your comment, it made my day!!!
Love,Lizzie
Really good, Lizzie. You're such an expert using repetition as a poetic element, and this dark side of your fantasy is particularly alluring to me.
Wed, February 1st, 2023 1:04am
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Wow, thank you!!! Love,Lizzie.
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Uhhh, isnt it much controlling too much????:P)... really a nice telling of it ????????
Sat, January 28th, 2023 6:53pm