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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Only a whiff of her scent

can render him delirious,

only the laughing sound

of her stilettos approaching

can send him into a vortex

of desire mingled with fear,

only the touch of her hand

on the nerves of his body

can make him lose control

and climax immediately.

but he won´t allow this,

knows her unbending rules,

he has learnt to hold it

till his mistress signals 

with just a piercing glance

that he has her permission.





Submitted: January 27, 2023

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Uhhh, isnt it much controlling too much????:P)... really a nice telling of it ????????

Sat, January 28th, 2023 6:53pm


You nailed, it, Lizzie, just the way it is.....I love your kinky side!

Sat, January 28th, 2023 8:02pm


Wow, thank you! Love, Lizzie.

Sat, January 28th, 2023 12:17pm


OMG.. I want that permission…. I almost …. Reading you poem…. Can I?! Pleeeease… can I ?!?!! How the heck do you do that?! With just words…

Sun, January 29th, 2023 10:50am


Ah it must be an ancient secret art,haha!
Thanks for your comment, it made my day!!!

Sun, January 29th, 2023 9:48am


Really good, Lizzie. You're such an expert using repetition as a poetic element, and this dark side of your fantasy is particularly alluring to me.

Wed, February 1st, 2023 1:04am


Wow, thank you!!! Love,Lizzie.

Tue, January 31st, 2023 7:57pm

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