I guess you never knew,
the long hours of the night
stretched into brisk dawns,
the hours I waited for you
peering into your absence,
the times I thought of you
while walking among crowds.
I guess you just didn´t know
my heart was so full of you
all your loves became mine,
my desire shaped by yours,
my memory embellished
by our brief time together.
I guess you´ll never know
I still love you, body and soul
and celebrate your existence,
Submitted: January 12, 2023
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How fortunate that person is or would be, to have someone like you so loyal, so dedicated and devoted.
Sat, January 14th, 2023 3:29pm
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Thank you so much for your words! Love, Lizzie.
Sun, January 15th, 2023 4:44pm
I guess I never knew how a poem like yours does to me....
Sat, January 14th, 2023 4:28pm
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Tbank you so much for your words! Love, Lizzie.
Sun, January 15th, 2023 4:42pm
I guess if he or she knew they might have a chance to be closer to you!
Sat, January 14th, 2023 9:14pm
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
Love, Lizzie.
Your loving sentiments are so beautiful, Lizzie x
Wed, January 18th, 2023 2:29am
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Thank you so much for your words! Love,Lizzie.
Wed, January 18th, 2023 7:21pm
It's amazing how much your talent has developed over time, Liz. You focus on the things poets see and bring them to those who are oblivious.
"Peering into your absence" is by far my favorite line in this piece - such a powerful image that encompasses the theme and essence of the poem.
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Dearest Kitten...thank you so much for your words! I love your reviews, they are inspirational.
I am so glad my poems resonate with you,
Love, Lizzie.
So much is steeped in so little it amazes me how it packs emotional power through every word. Lovely. :)
Sun, January 22nd, 2023 5:59pm
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Thank you so much, dear Amy!!! Love, Lizzie.
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Lovely, reminds me of someone dear to me : )
Fri, January 13th, 2023 12:56pm