He lay on the cold floor,
rose petals around him,
lit candles on his body,
heat warming his being,
his hungrily swollen cock
Imprisoned in its cage,
waiting for some release.
Her thin lips smiled,
and then she placed
handfuls of rose petals
all around his body,
lit another white candle,
let him feel its heat
slowly coursing through
his desiring body,
He just grew delirious,
unable to curb his lust,
eager to offer himself
to his powerful mistress.
She just smiled sweetly,
undid his cock slowly
and allowed him to come
but only once she was gone.
And so he did as ordered,
bathed in sweat and tears,
relieved by a violent orgasm
laced by pain and longing.
The sound of her stilettoes
pierced his ears for a while,
while the candles died softly
and he slept peacefully at last
while the aroma of his cum
mingled with the scent of roses.
Submitted: December 26, 2022
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You have captured so much emotion here, the frustration of being caged, the anticipation of physical and sexual release, and the admiration of his Mistress for putting him IN the cage and releasing him at her discretion. I envy him.
Tue, December 27th, 2022 2:03am
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His Mistress gave him what he needed but not necessarily what he wanted...you have captured what I wanted to convey.
Thank you for your words.Love, Lizzie.
I could smell the rose petals and I imagine the candles giving off a soft French Vanilla aroma. Very intoxicating poem.
Tue, December 27th, 2022 3:05pm
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Wow,,, thanks for your words, Love,Lizzie
Tue, December 27th, 2022 4:36pm
A mistress, a cage, candles, wax dripping on body… petals…. pain…pleasure… a violent orgasm… Now this is what I call a dream come true… I love you Liz… you just made my day
Wed, December 28th, 2022 5:04am
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Wow...I love your comment...it made my day as well! Thank you, dear samnash!
Love, Lizzie.
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DampKitten
Makes me want to open a florist. Compelling imagery. Nothing like a man and his cage.
Tue, December 27th, 2022 2:02amAuthor
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Ah...I will buy roses from you! (red). Thank you so much for your words, dearest Kitten!
Tue, December 27th, 2022 4:31amLove, Lizzie.