Wandering Eyes

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


What is it that you see, when you look at me?

 Watching from afar and just before you walk away, there's that smile.

Where do your thoughts go, when you're alone ?

Am I there ?

Do you remember the words we shared ?

Just small talk over time, that just might start a fire ? 

 

Your eyes follow me and there's a sparkle to them. 

Did I put that there ?

Or is it me just getting lost in the sea of yours ?

 

How is it that you are so in control ?

You make me brave and shy all at once. 

You move me but keep me still.

Oh, but those wandering eyes of yours. 

They hypnotize, they do.

 

Come and take a walk with me. 

Tell me your story, I'll tell you mine.

I want to know are those wandering eyes really for me ?

Or was it just a dream ?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Submitted: December 07, 2022

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Dick Wood

Deep with emotional tones. I loved this.

Wed, December 7th, 2022 4:09pm

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Thank you so much for giving this a read. I appreciate you : )

Wed, December 7th, 2022 2:10pm

Darian

It's the wanting and the yearning. I've always said, that's what does it for me. Love it!

Wed, December 7th, 2022 9:52pm

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Thank you Darian for coming to read me. Pleased you loved it.

Wed, December 7th, 2022 2:09pm

samnash

Definitely for you…

Thu, December 8th, 2022 2:03am

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Is this the romantic piece you were looking for, Sam ?

Wed, December 7th, 2022 8:40pm

willnorman

Incredibly poetic and provocative...thought inducing, I love it. Very creative and unique.

Mon, December 12th, 2022 1:28am

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Thank you Will : )

Sun, December 11th, 2022 10:25pm

Spyguy

A dream... A flutter, cross the sky... My silent Owl, with hidden cowl~
The Valentine, of distance mine! Varied lives, from different hives!
Truthfulness, respect, & joy; Keep my spirit's
peace 't employ!!!

Tue, December 13th, 2022 2:02pm

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You always write such pretty words, Spy. Thank you!

Tue, December 13th, 2022 5:36pm

DampKitten

I'm so glad you're writing poetry, Nite. Your voice is so different from your prose, and you have a gift for understanding focus. You really know where to shine the light and point the lens that many don't understand.

Poetry is about the flow of the mind. I don't want to wade through brackish water. I want to be carried downstream, rocked by a current of emotion. That's what you do here.

Second person narrative is so effective here, so personal. Your piece is about feelings and inquiry. It's about reading the signs. It's about asking the questions we can never ask... except in our poems.

Wed, December 14th, 2022 4:13am

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Wow! Im blown away by your thoughts on my poem, very much appreciated . Thank you D.K

Fri, December 16th, 2022 12:04am

puellalove

Oh this was good. Am i there? This is the painful love between doubts and hopes, but willing hopes to be dominant. So good you tell it, very effective ...

Sat, January 28th, 2023 2:45pm

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Thank you Puella : )

Sat, January 28th, 2023 1:36pm

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