Wrapped up

Poem by: Lizziewolf

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Wrapped up in the glitter

of soon-to-be-gone affairs,

wrapped up in the glamour

of never-to-be love stories,

wrapped up in old words,

uttered by countless lovers,

she travelled through time,

through passing minutes

and unforgiving hours,

to be reborn tantalizingly

in the all-consuming madness

of near-death climaxes.

Submitted: November 14, 2022

Poetry love longing time

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willnorman

Near death climaxes - whoa! That's pretty intense. I could relate that to men who get aroused when smothered by a woman - it could easily end up with a near death orgasm or even worse, lol.
I don't want to to take anything away from that poem; you have such a smooth, erotic style with just the right words, in the right sequence to convey images that tease and please us all. Nicely done, as they say.

Mon, November 14th, 2022 8:24pm

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Thank you so much! Love, Lizzie

Mon, November 14th, 2022 3:54pm

DampKitten

So, this is actually a single sentence. Pretty cool.
Interesting you should choose third person omniscient here.
I like your use of repetition. It's one of your favorite poetic elements.

Wed, December 14th, 2022 4:43am

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I am so glad you like my work! Thank you, dear Kitten, for reading and commenting.
Love, Lizzie.

Wed, December 14th, 2022 3:24pm