Take Down

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Love is a battlefield...

And you are so intoxicating,

my delicious, sweet princess -

how I crave  for your luscious brown skin

to glide across my creases,

your delicate warm tongue

to taste  my secret places,

your sensitive fingers

to explore my desires.


I long for your

beautiful brown eyes

to stare into my sky-blue gaze,

your black hair mingling with my chestnut brown,

your plump chocolate nipples against my cherry ripe berries.


I will lick every inch of you, 

savoring the scent of your pleasure.

I will glaze you in saliva

and dust you with sugar.


My teeth

will draw blood

where you beg me to mark you.

I will bind you and cage you. 

I will force you

to cum.


You will never dream

of escaping...


Dream only, my princess, 

to be tied  down tighter, 

to be bitten and eaten



Dream only

to be suffocated

beneath the weight

of my wetness,


beneath the gentle pink folds of

our forbidden forever.


Submitted: October 31, 2022

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Are you aware about the consequences ?

Mon, October 31st, 2022 8:15am


Please show me, my sweet girl!

Tue, November 1st, 2022 8:02pm

Dick Wood

Very hot poem. And the pics make it so much more.

Mon, October 31st, 2022 11:02am


I'm so glad you like it, Dick. Thanks for reading!

Tue, November 1st, 2022 8:02pm

Amy F. Turner

With such slaying writing, it is not so difficult to imagine the battle was over before it began the layered course of a willing surrender of such erotic charms.

Tue, November 1st, 2022 5:56pm


Awe, you are the sweetest, Amy! Care to wrestle?

Tue, November 1st, 2022 8:01pm


Another one of your best... something to make me live for...

Tue, November 1st, 2022 8:29pm


I want to give you something to make you hard for, Sam..

Tue, November 1st, 2022 8:00pm

Ailsa McNair

Poetic and naughty as ever! Simon

Tue, November 1st, 2022 11:48pm


Thank you, sweetness!

Tue, November 1st, 2022 8:00pm


Why don't you taste it?

Wed, November 2nd, 2022 9:46pm


I intend to

Thu, November 3rd, 2022 10:40pm

sweet lemon

lol!! kitty,
what part of this pleasure trip is a "bbbaaatttttlleeeeffffiiieeelllddd"

Thu, November 3rd, 2022 12:05am


Oh, you know how it is, Lemon Squeeze. I like it rough.

Thu, November 3rd, 2022 10:38pm


Those kind of epic battles are the spotlight attraction in the highlights reel!!!

Thu, November 3rd, 2022 5:58pm


I'm glad you think so, Spy!

Fri, November 4th, 2022 5:17pm


The photo, while hot and applicable to the poem, doesn't show "luscious brown skin" ?
Nevertheless, the content was as hot as ever and skillfully written, as always.

Sat, November 5th, 2022 1:51pm


Yea, I didn't burn a lot of time looking for photos since skin color was really my emphasis.
Thanks for checking this out, Will! I'm glad you find it hot!

Sun, November 6th, 2022 12:56pm


Read it again. The whole is gorgeous but my fav line " glaze you in saliva and dust you with sugar " like a dream you dream forever

Mon, November 14th, 2022 7:10pm


Thank you for pointing that out, sweetness.

Thu, November 17th, 2022 8:33pm

Ailsa McNair

I found this highly inspirational for my own writing (my novel), thank you Meg, HJx

Wed, December 14th, 2022 10:26pm


I'm so glad you did, HJ. Thanks for reading and telling me!

Wed, December 14th, 2022 6:49pm

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