Maze

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A woman lost in a maze,

a maze inside the city,

a maze made of dark alleys,

of broken cobblestones

and sad-spirited mornings.

Wandering around streets,

walking in an odd lucid dream,

despairing to find a trace,

just some long-lost sign

of some half-forgotten story,

a story of fierce desire

laced with the ironical smile

of the unforgiving seconds.

Submitted: October 28, 2022

Poetry love longing time

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Very nice!

Sat, October 29th, 2022 10:14pm

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Thank you! Love, Lizzie.

Sun, October 30th, 2022 3:46pm

Definitely a maze. I’m still lost between the wandering and the walking…

Sun, October 30th, 2022 1:40am

I think your writing just gets more and more powerful..

Sun, October 30th, 2022 4:45am

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Wow, that is great to hear, thank you so much! Love, Lizzie,

Sun, October 30th, 2022 3:44pm

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