And I looked into
your transparent eyes,
you trembled before me
and yet dared to speak.
"Please, I beg you,
allow me to be yours,
I will serve you well."
And I looked past you
and smiled at the crowd
and said in a cold voice
"Stand up, do not beg,
I do not like beggars,
be free to submit yourself,
if so your body and soul
find these to be their desires,
just come to me freely,
proud to become mine
and show this vane world
our bond nothing can break.
If you obey this first order
and I think you certainly will,
we will leave this place
but not before you proclaim
to everyone assembled here
that you are already taken."
Submitted: October 11, 2022
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Mmm mmm such command can be intoxicating! Yummy!
Tue, October 11th, 2022 5:46pm
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Indeed...Thanls for your words,Amy!
Love, Lizzie
I don't think I would follow this command right away. Eventually I would, but I would want to make you work for it. Prove to me that I must obey.
Wed, October 12th, 2022 2:50pm
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I see...read the poem again if you please...I was asked to take him Since I so graciously agreed at least allow me to test his obedience...
Anyway, thanks for your words- Love as always, Lizzie.
Also, this could be an opener to a much larger story. You've got me thinking here, Lizzie. You've got me thinking, and it's a beautiful thing.
Thu, October 13th, 2022 5:26pm
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I am glad you found it so inspiring! Thank you for your words. Love, Lizzie.
Mon, October 17th, 2022 9:49am
Sounds like groveling. Very unattractive. Take a stand and walk to her. Proclaim loudly and with pride you belong to her.
Love it !!
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Thank you, that is what I wanted! Love, Lizzie.
I agree with Amy.
It's a prologue to a novel.
Get busy
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Wow, thank you! I guess I must. Love, Lizzie.
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So be it...
Tue, October 11th, 2022 4:52pmAuthor
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Mmm...seems this rule is to your liking...
Tue, October 11th, 2022 7:04pmThanks for your words. Love, Lizzie.