First rule

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


And I looked into 

your transparent eyes,

you trembled before me

and yet dared to speak.

"Please, I beg you,

allow me to be yours,

I will serve you well."

And I looked past you

and smiled at the crowd 

and said in a cold voice

"Stand up, do not beg,

I do not like beggars,

be free to submit yourself,

if so your body and soul

find these to be their desires,

just come to me freely,

proud to become mine

and show this vane world

our bond nothing can break.

If you obey this  first order

and I think you certainly will,

we will leave this place

but not before you proclaim 

to everyone assembled here

that you are already taken."

 


Submitted: October 11, 2022

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willnorman

So be it...

Tue, October 11th, 2022 4:52pm

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Mmm...seems this rule is to your liking...
Thanks for your words. Love, Lizzie.

Tue, October 11th, 2022 7:04pm

Amy F. Turner

Mmm mmm such command can be intoxicating! Yummy!

Tue, October 11th, 2022 5:46pm

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Indeed...Thanls for your words,Amy!
Love, Lizzie

Tue, October 11th, 2022 6:59pm

Dick Wood

I don't think I would follow this command right away. Eventually I would, but I would want to make you work for it. Prove to me that I must obey.

Wed, October 12th, 2022 2:50pm

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I see...read the poem again if you please...I was asked to take him Since I so graciously agreed at least allow me to test his obedience...
Anyway, thanks for your words- Love as always, Lizzie.



Wed, October 12th, 2022 10:59am

Amy F. Turner

Also, this could be an opener to a much larger story. You've got me thinking here, Lizzie. You've got me thinking, and it's a beautiful thing.

Thu, October 13th, 2022 5:26pm

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I am glad you found it so inspiring! Thank you for your words. Love, Lizzie.

Mon, October 17th, 2022 9:49am

Nite-Owl

Sounds like groveling. Very unattractive. Take a stand and walk to her. Proclaim loudly and with pride you belong to her.
Love it !!

Mon, October 17th, 2022 3:11am

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Thank you, that is what I wanted! Love, Lizzie.







Mon, October 17th, 2022 9:48am

DampKitten

I agree with Amy.
It's a prologue to a novel.
Get busy

Sat, October 22nd, 2022 6:24pm

Author
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Wow, thank you! I guess I must. Love, Lizzie.

Sat, October 22nd, 2022 1:53pm

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