Passionately Toxic

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

I’ll never try to sell this as some brilliant fucking poetry. It’s not and it’s not meant to be. These are just my raw feelings about someone in my life. And I hope that me writing this and posting it out for the world to see (whether they care or not) and getting it out of myself, can help me heal.

I love you just as passionately as I hate you.

I want to fuck you as passionately as I want to hurt you.

I want to save you as passionately as I want to kill you.

I want to be near you as passionately as I want to avoid you.

I want to hold on to you as passionately as I want to release you.

I want to hear your words as passionately as I want to block them out.

I want to believe your feelings as passionately as I want to deny them.

I want to please you as passionately as I want to disobey you.

You arouse me as passionately as you disgust me.

I want you to heal me as passionately as you broke me.

I want you to sober me as passionately as you drugged me.

I want you to free me as passionately as you imprisoned me.

 


Submitted: October 09, 2022

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DampKitten

Don't sell yourself short, Ice..
That's BRILLIANT FUCKING POETRY and publication worthy.

Fantastic...
Driven by repetition, emboldened by negative energy and confused emotional chaos. Just exactly how it is with no powdered sugar or sunset beaches. A dysfunctional fucking wet spot reminder of what a dick can do to us.

Change your panties and write something else. This was freaking amazing..

Meg

Sun, October 9th, 2022 7:56pm

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Oh gosh that means so much coming from you. You definitely see what I was trying portray. You always seem to do that and I love and appreciate it. Thanks so much for reading!

Sun, October 9th, 2022 5:35pm

willnorman

This was incredible, honest, bitter sweet for both adjectives. Very clever.

Sun, October 9th, 2022 8:51pm

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Thank you so much!

Sun, October 9th, 2022 5:31pm

Amy F. Turner

This perfectly expresses the raw madness of love in how it can't be reasoned with or controlled and how much it can hurt as well as yield pleasures beyond what seem safe or healthy. Definitely relatable in the power of the delivery. Well done!

Mon, October 10th, 2022 1:46am

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Thank you so much for dropping by and reading this, it’s an absolute honor and you put in words perfectly how I feel and I was trying to portray. Thanks again and love ya!

Mon, October 10th, 2022 12:31pm

Nite-Owl

There's nothing more I could add or say different that hasn't already been said. This was awesome , great work!

Mon, October 10th, 2022 2:02pm

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Oh thank you so much!!

Mon, October 10th, 2022 12:32pm

Dick Wood

This was a deep down to the bone, raw, emotional poem that made me had to read it three times.
Time to move on and look ahead.

Mon, October 10th, 2022 10:30pm

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Yeah I feel that. Officially moving on.

Mon, October 10th, 2022 5:00pm

Spyguy

As you have already seen by comments from others, you stole the idea of deception, hurt, & betrayal from the hearts of it's recipients! You really hit this ball out of his shorts!!!

Tue, October 11th, 2022 5:13am

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Thank you, and I appreciate you reading this.

Tue, October 11th, 2022 2:19am

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