I love you just as passionately as I hate you.
I want to fuck you as passionately as I want to hurt you.
I want to save you as passionately as I want to kill you.
I want to be near you as passionately as I want to avoid you.
I want to hold on to you as passionately as I want to release you.
I want to hear your words as passionately as I want to block them out.
I want to believe your feelings as passionately as I want to deny them.
I want to please you as passionately as I want to disobey you.
You arouse me as passionately as you disgust me.
I want you to heal me as passionately as you broke me.
I want you to sober me as passionately as you drugged me.
I want you to free me as passionately as you imprisoned me.
Submitted: October 09, 2022
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This was incredible, honest, bitter sweet for both adjectives. Very clever.
Sun, October 9th, 2022 8:51pm
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Thank you so much!
Sun, October 9th, 2022 5:31pm
This perfectly expresses the raw madness of love in how it can't be reasoned with or controlled and how much it can hurt as well as yield pleasures beyond what seem safe or healthy. Definitely relatable in the power of the delivery. Well done!
Mon, October 10th, 2022 1:46am
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Thank you so much for dropping by and reading this, it’s an absolute honor and you put in words perfectly how I feel and I was trying to portray. Thanks again and love ya!
Mon, October 10th, 2022 12:31pm
There's nothing more I could add or say different that hasn't already been said. This was awesome , great work!
Mon, October 10th, 2022 2:02pm
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Oh thank you so much!!
Mon, October 10th, 2022 12:32pm
This was a deep down to the bone, raw, emotional poem that made me had to read it three times.
Time to move on and look ahead.
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Yeah I feel that. Officially moving on.
Mon, October 10th, 2022 5:00pm
As you have already seen by comments from others, you stole the idea of deception, hurt, & betrayal from the hearts of it's recipients! You really hit this ball out of his shorts!!!
Tue, October 11th, 2022 5:13am
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Thank you, and I appreciate you reading this.
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DampKitten
Don't sell yourself short, Ice..
Sun, October 9th, 2022 7:56pmThat's BRILLIANT FUCKING POETRY and publication worthy.
Fantastic...
Driven by repetition, emboldened by negative energy and confused emotional chaos. Just exactly how it is with no powdered sugar or sunset beaches. A dysfunctional fucking wet spot reminder of what a dick can do to us.
Change your panties and write something else. This was freaking amazing..
Meg
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Oh gosh that means so much coming from you. You definitely see what I was trying portray. You always seem to do that and I love and appreciate it. Thanks so much for reading!
Sun, October 9th, 2022 5:35pm