Oh, hold your breath,
her footsteps are closer.
you hear the dangling
of your own chains,
and your body shivers
in fear and fiery lust-
Just bend your head,
she might pick it up,
she might even pet it.
Do not dare play
with your erect cock,
do not even play
with your desires.
She will see to them,
give you what you need,
while she takes pride
in your submission.
Submitted: September 30, 2022
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Oh wow, that's very different from your usual subject matter. I really like it. Fantastic imagery and hugely alluring. I like the second person narrative. Mesmerizing and fascinating. So direct and emphatic. You stepped away from yourself...
Mon, October 3rd, 2022 3:25am
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Thanks so much. Kitten!!! Love, Lizzie.
Mon, October 3rd, 2022 3:02am
Once again, the direct attention to her sub, alluring and seductive is titillating. Will she or won't she give him what he needs? Can you hear the panting among us?
Sat, October 8th, 2022 3:33pm
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Ah, I think I can...
Thanks for your words. Love, Lizzie.
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Hot...very hot. The anticipation of your lover to submit you to her desires. Been there, done that.
Fri, September 30th, 2022 6:12pmAuthor
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Thanks for your words! Love, Lizzie.
Fri, September 30th, 2022 4:22pm