The Song
When I heard her sing
my world changed
for the better,
I think
The song she played
made my heart sing
until her tune
changed
In a blink of an eye
my life crumbled
to the ground
and died
The words I still hear
in my head to this day
echoed my happiness
and fear
Suddenly
Silence
Submitted: September 23, 2022
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Only song around here needs to be happy birthday, but alas I'm late...
Sat, September 24th, 2022 4:37pm
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Yes you’re late… you have to make up for it… I’ll bring the whip, you bring the chocolate… I’ve never tasted chocolate of of a nipple before…
Tue, September 27th, 2022 12:04pm
The symmetry is very lovely in this heartfelt piece!
Wed, September 28th, 2022 11:25am
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Thank you my friend. I like symmetry. I believe it is in everything we see in the world. When it is also displayed in the prose and poetry it speaks to our heart and our nature as human beings.
Thu, September 29th, 2022 2:20am
Such a beautiful agony, Sam.
This is certainly one of your best, I must say. I've never seen you use spacing so brilliantly. You understand the power of a solitary word, and you emphasize that here. Truely excellent.
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oooo.... Im blushing... If I know you better I believe you are deliberately trying to make me blush...
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You write pretty poetry, Sam.
Fri, September 23rd, 2022 6:00pmAuthor
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Not as pretty as you… or yours
Tue, September 27th, 2022 12:01pm