The Song

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

The Song 


When I heard her sing

my world changed

for the better, 

I think


The song she played

made my heart sing

until her tune 



In a blink of an eye

my life crumbled 

to the ground

and died


The words I still hear 

in my head to this day 

echoed my happiness 

and fear





Submitted: September 23, 2022

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You write pretty poetry, Sam.

Fri, September 23rd, 2022 6:00pm


Not as pretty as you… or yours

Tue, September 27th, 2022 12:01pm

Amy F. Turner

Only song around here needs to be happy birthday, but alas I'm late...

Sat, September 24th, 2022 4:37pm


Yes you’re late… you have to make up for it… I’ll bring the whip, you bring the chocolate… I’ve never tasted chocolate of of a nipple before…

Tue, September 27th, 2022 12:04pm


The symmetry is very lovely in this heartfelt piece!

Wed, September 28th, 2022 11:25am


Thank you my friend. I like symmetry. I believe it is in everything we see in the world. When it is also displayed in the prose and poetry it speaks to our heart and our nature as human beings.

Thu, September 29th, 2022 2:20am


Such a beautiful agony, Sam.

This is certainly one of your best, I must say. I've never seen you use spacing so brilliantly. You understand the power of a solitary word, and you emphasize that here. Truely excellent.

Sun, October 2nd, 2022 9:19pm


oooo.... Im blushing... If I know you better I believe you are deliberately trying to make me blush...

Tue, October 4th, 2022 1:29pm

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