Carnal Violence

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Outer_Limits

What we crave isn't always sweet vanilla. It's not pure or innocent, and we shouldn't be judged for it. Pleasure never hurt anyone, unless they wanted to be hurt, if you know what I mean. ;)

I'll provoke you,

Goad you until you

Lose your mind,

Until you give me what I want.


Everyone has a dark side,

And so do you, darling.

Don't be afraid to be

A little wild.


Electrify me with

Your hungry kisses,

Send shivers down

My spine.


Make me feel your passion

On my skin,

Painted in shades

Of red and purple.


You're getting annoyed,

Am I getting to you?

Don't you want to show me

Who's in control?


Bend me to your will,

Make my whole body sing

In blinding pleasure,

As you move inside of me.


If you don't give me what

I hunger for, no problem.

There's plenty of men

Somewhere out there.


You don't like it?

Punish me, then.

Prove your point,

Do it rough.


If you give me your all,

I'll be generous in return.

Soft and pliant,

All yours.


Own me, thrill me,

Make me love you,

And hate you at the same time,

When you're not here with me.


We do it violently,

Yet lovingly.

We leave soft and sweet

For another occasion.










Submitted: September 08, 2022

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The question is; Do you come right out & tell him this, or do you, (As most women do), in a word, expect him to "Read your mind", & just know somehow that this is what you want?

Fri, September 9th, 2022 4:57pm


Well, honesty is the best policy, isn't it? It's always better to just say what's on your mind, our lives (and relationships) would've been much simpler that way. Regardless of our gender. :)

Fri, September 9th, 2022 12:26pm


Nicely done. What was his reply?!

Fri, September 9th, 2022 5:55pm


I'll leave that to your imagination. ;) Glad you liked it!

Fri, September 9th, 2022 12:27pm


That's fantastically done and a relatively infrequent topic, particularly for poetry. I like it a lot.

Sat, September 10th, 2022 3:57am


Thank you, I appreciate it a lot, and you're right, it's a bit out of the norm for poetry. Have a nice day/night! :)

Sat, September 10th, 2022 6:15am


I like it, a lot.

Sat, September 10th, 2022 2:53pm


That's great! I appreciate it, I'll do my best to publish more of this kind of content! :)

Sat, September 10th, 2022 10:49am


Provocative, alluring, almost demanding and yet so subtle that it is easy to see who is really in control.

Fri, September 16th, 2022 8:40pm


That's true, in this one it can be easy to figure out who's in control.

Fri, September 16th, 2022 4:16pm

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