You're right
about 'Breed Me'.
It's very superficial.
A thoughtless series
of sexual interactions with sloppy,
explicit scenes, minimal depth, complete moral abandonment.
It's my literary cocaine addiction.
Sometimes I have to stop and vomit profusely
as I'm typing, then return in a sweat with dilated pupils,
tachypneic and tremulous with a palpating heart.
I'll lower my panties and squirt across the screen
until the keyboard explodes in a sparkle
and everything goes up in flames...
at least all the pretty chapters
of matrimonial bliss.
I'm left with the dregs and the decadence.
I'm left with the sucking and fucking,
the raw and the ravenous,
the swelling and bruising.
Quietly I saunter to the adjoining room
where the devil shall meet me
and pull out my chair,
where he greets me with wine and song,
where he warms my monitor and illuminates my interface...
where he sticks his thick dick in my mouth,
and all is sweet again.
Submitted: July 24, 2022
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This is what I was saying all along…. Only the deviless never appeared to me…
Mon, July 25th, 2022 3:51amTrue life is like that.
That is why the purists prefer fiction.
Keep fucking and sucking and telling it as it is " hotness".
You have your readers addicted definitely! I love this line 'Literary cocaine addiction'
Mon, July 25th, 2022 6:55pmHit me with your best shot.
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You, my good woman, and my bad girl, are an enigma. I don't know how someone can create such down and dirty sex and have the same characters repeat if over and over, for what, 62 times now? It's hard to keep score with all that love juice and semen all over the place.
Mon, July 25th, 2022 1:02amBut how can we as avid readers of erotica ignore the probably of more pure lust flowing onto the page dripping from orifices everywhere? And it's because as raw as it is, we want to be there, to be a part of that pounding, that sucking, that draining of fluids that can never be matched in other erotic stories.
The Princess of Porn has it all - brains, talent, imagination and what we have to believe is the hottest libido this side of Bakersfield, CA. (Which I've been told is the hotbed for women who like sex so much they never wear clothes.)
So let the devil have his fun, sweet lady, and continue to lure us into your den of sin and debauchery. We cannot wait to be chained to your bed.
And I appreciate the poem - now may I get back to my fantasies? (What color panties are you wearing?) lol
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What makes you think I'm wearing panties? I just got back from Bakersfield.
Sun, July 24th, 2022 8:31pmSixty Two times... let me see, let me see...
How many times per year would you say the average couple in America have sex per year? That would be essentially once every 6 days, almost once per week. That's not very much.
Thanks for reading, Will!