Rain

Spyguy

Such sadness, such a depth of despair;
I pray for my Lizziewolf, I pray for repair!
To've been so deceived, to've been so used:
A devilish soul, who has her so abused!!!
Look inside Princess, look inside Dear...
Majesty resides, just cast out your fear!
You were born noble, you were born free ->
A Princess resides, where you cannot see!
Your Father the King, to mind He would bring:
Hidden great talents, help you to sing;
So do not despair, from a tyrannical fool:
No, look inside self, you'll realize you're "Cool"
Yes Princess Lizzie, my magnificent friend ~
You truly are Princess, & this aint the end!

DampKitten

That one is a little different for you, Lizzie. I like it. Honestly, I don't think of rain as a natural killer, though I get the acid thing. Frost is a more common analogy, but you might have been looking for something less typical.

Your piece reminded me of a poem you should read...mind you, it's ethnic, and intentionally so. It took me a while to find it.

"I'm a Fool to Love You" by Cornelius Eady