Guilty
Guilty feet may have no rhythm
yet skilled tongue loves my bum
lick it, smack it, make it nice
red with hand prints twice
distract from the hard sausage
on the prowl for wreckage
destruction by your measure
wet and slick endeavor
cry for it on the double
deep entry, bottom out
stick it in my mouth
clean it good of your goo
ready and hard to renew
excitement of pleasure
you and I treasure
captive audience
makes moan at once
at dripping crease
wanting your meat
beat the wood
rubbing my hood
squirting with cum
tremble and hum
feel the joyous burn
our hardy release earned.
Submitted: July 01, 2022
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Amy, I don't know how you do it but you make me blush, girlie : ) saying things I still haven't dared to utter. Wooo, that was a sizzlin play on words.
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I don't either. I have read your stuff, girlie, and whatever direction you go, erotic or horror, have me riveted and blushing. You always weave a fine tale. Any whoo, so glad you enjoyed the sizzling display. Thanks for reading and letting me know your thoughts. :)
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 3:18am
Dynamically erotic and arousing, Ms. Turner. You have a way with words and how you put them to rhyme in any form is amazing. Hot!
Sat, July 2nd, 2022 3:38pm
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Wow, Thanks, Will. That's very kind commentary. Admittedly, of all the sorts of writing I do, it is the most daunting (which is why I do so little of it). However, I felt inspired to put pen to paper while traveling with my husband on a date and am pleased it is received so well. ;)
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 3:15am
Yup… I just felt the release … and it’s your fault.
Sat, July 2nd, 2022 8:59pm
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This is the sort of blame I always enjoy.
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 2:55am
Another home run by the famous "Babe Ruth" of erotic fantasy! Well done my Princess friend!!
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 10:58am
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Thanks so much for the read and compliment, Spy. I am happy you found my offering pleasing to your senses. :)
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 4:54am
Big mistake reading your hot poem at a Starbucks. Had to shift my junk. Your poem made my jeans tight and made me walk funny. :D
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 3:32pm
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These are the sort of mistakes that makes life so interesting. Thanks so much for sharing the fabulous reaction you've had. How delicious! :D
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 2:17pm
What I'd give to have a lazy Sunday with the hot chick in this salacious top class piece of erotica.
Tue, July 5th, 2022 12:47pm
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Lazy Sundays are a fav of mine along with hot erotica. Thanks for the read and comment. :)
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Fuck yea, just imagine George Michael back there with his guilty feet giving you the rhythm. Shit, that guy was hot as hell. Damn shame he was gay, and he didn't look too great towards the end. (Love those 'Wham' pics)
Fri, July 1st, 2022 11:37pmThis piece is just dripping with sausage juice, Amy - good gracious! Puts me in that Italian mood. Love the rhyme and the explicit imagery! Perfect for a Fourth of July Explosion! Great Job!
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I love Italian sausage which is why I married one :D. Thanks for the compliment. I did have "Careless Whisper" in my ear while writing this piece and Wham! has always been a favorite of mine. Fun music and happy even if the artists weren't. Any whoo, hope you have a great explosion of your own. ;)
Sun, July 3rd, 2022 3:09am